作业帮英语短文改错 必要的地方注明原因
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英语短文改错 必要的地方注明原因
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing.Even the
Heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go.Setting 76.______
Off very early,we went along an extreme narrow road,all 77.______
in high spirits.On every side of the road were green fields 78.______
and some farm house.We could hear the sound of the 79.______
rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter.At noon 80.______
we reached the top of the mountain.That surprised us 81.______
most there was the beauty of scenes.After having a short 82.______
rest there and sharing with the food we had brought,we 83.______
started going down.It had rained even harder.We were 84.______
wet to the skin,and we still sang and laughed happily.85.______
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing.Even the
Heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go.Setting 76.______
Off very early,we went along an extreme narrow road,all 77.______
in high spirits.On every side of the road were green fields 78.______
and some farm house.We could hear the sound of the 79.______
rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter.At noon 80.______
we reached the top of the mountain.That surprised us 81.______
most there was the beauty of scenes.After having a short 82.______
rest there and sharing with the food we had brought,we 83.______
started going down.It had rained even harder.We were 84.______
wet to the skin,and we still sang and laughed happily.85.______
76.go改成going
prevent sb (from) doing sth 阻止某人做某事
77.extreme改成extremely
程度副词extremely修饰形容词narrow
78.every改成each/either
road“道路”只有两边,而every指“三者或以上任一”,each/either才是指“两者之间任一”
79.house改成houses
前面有some,而house是可数名词
80.mixing改成mixed
固定搭配mix A with B,所以A（the sound of the rain and our footsteps）和mix之间为被动关系,所以用其过去分词mixed
81.That改成What
主语从句what surprised us most there中,缺少表示sth的主语,所以用what代替并引导
82.scenes改成scenery
scene指含有人活动的人文景观,而scenery才是指“自然景色”,且是不可数名词
83.去掉with
share为及物动词,直接用share sth (with sb),不用share with sth
84.去掉had
整篇使用一般过去时,而且没有动作发生时间的先后比较,所以不必用过去完成时（表示“过去的过去”）
85.and改成but
句意前后明显为转折,而非顺承
prevent sb (from) doing sth 阻止某人做某事
77.extreme改成extremely
程度副词extremely修饰形容词narrow
78.every改成each/either
road“道路”只有两边,而every指“三者或以上任一”,each/either才是指“两者之间任一”
79.house改成houses
前面有some,而house是可数名词
80.mixing改成mixed
固定搭配mix A with B,所以A（the sound of the rain and our footsteps）和mix之间为被动关系,所以用其过去分词mixed
81.That改成What
主语从句what surprised us most there中,缺少表示sth的主语,所以用what代替并引导
82.scenes改成scenery
scene指含有人活动的人文景观,而scenery才是指“自然景色”,且是不可数名词
83.去掉with
share为及物动词,直接用share sth (with sb),不用share with sth
84.去掉had
整篇使用一般过去时,而且没有动作发生时间的先后比较,所以不必用过去完成时（表示“过去的过去”）
85.and改成but
句意前后明显为转折,而非顺承