各位给我的作文一些意见吧

各位给我的作文一些意见吧
是剑4 TEST 1 的大作文,是要我们写3个传媒的优点和不足.
我的英语不怎么样,希望你们可以给些建议帮忙我去提高
With the development of technology,the medium are more
advanced than past.But every coin has two sides,these medium will cause some disadvantages and advantages for our life.In my essay,i will explain this argument in detailing.
Below i will argu 3 medium in my article they are television,books and radio respectively.Firstly,TV is very common in our home and it can provide much information for us which is convenient.when we are in trouble.TV can reduce our pressure.On the other hand.Since TV is invented by people,the number of people who like to watch TV at home is increasing.They reduce time to do sports,i think that it is bad for their health.
Secondly,books is very classial media,though books is created for long time ago.It can keep long time and contain information is current.you can go everywhere with it,even if there are no internet and signal,As well all know,books contain information is limited and buy books will cost you a large of money.If you do not cherish them,it is easy which is lost.
The following media is radio,it is very old media.In the past people use a very big radio which look like a brick.Nowadays,many cellphone can contain this function,thus listen to radio make easy and it is free.And also the range of signal is very wide.to listen to radio is very conveninent.But sometimes radio will bring some drawback,we just listen a voice for radio,it is not vivid for us to get these information and some place just accpet to a weak signal,the voice will become very noisy.
Based on the above factors,I can draw the conclution that if people can use TV in a correct way ,it will provide much useful information for our life.

你的我翻译下来是这个 不知道对不?
随着技术的发展,媒体每个硬币比past.But先进的有两方面,这些媒体将导致我们的life.In我的文章的一些缺点和优点,我会详细解释这个论点.
下面我将argu 3中,在我的文章他们是电视,书籍和广播respectively.Firstly,电视是我们的家很普通,它可以为我们提供很多资料,是convenient.when我们trouble.TV,都可以减少我们的压力.另一方面hand.Since电视是由人发明,谁的人喜欢在家看电视的人数increasing.They缩短时间做运动,我认为这是对健康造成影响.
其次,书籍是非常classial媒体,虽然书是创建长期ago.It能保持很久,包含的信息是current.you可以与它无处不在,即使没有互联网和信号,大家都知道,书籍包含的信息有限,购买书籍将花费您的money.If你不珍惜他们的大,这很容易丢失.
下列媒体是无线电波,这是非常古老的媒体.过去人们在使用一个非常大的无线电像一个brick.Nowadays看,许多手机可以包含此功能,从而使广播收听方便,这是free.And也是信号范围很wide.to收听电台的有时候很conveninent.But电台将带来一些缺点,我们只是听一个电台的声音,这不是我们生动获取这些信息,有些地方只是accpet以微弱信号,声音会变得非常嘈杂.
基于上述因素,我可以得出conclution,如果人们可以利用以正确的方式电视机,它将提供了许多有益的信息,为我们的生活.
Abstract: Nowadays, with the increasingly intense competition of media industry’s brand, the brand competition of the Overseas Chinese media doesn’t seem to be so active, however. In fact, as China’s international status has been rising, the focus of worldwide economy has been east moving and the Overseas Chinese economy has been developing further, it is inevitable for the Overseas Chinese media steps into the procession of brand competition. So strengthening the understanding of the importance of brand consciousness has become the vital matter of immediate urgency to the Overseas Chinese media. And distinguished from other kinds of media, it is worth mentioning that the Overseas Chinese media has been pursuing long-term and profound social benefits besides economic ones, such as gathering the Chinese people and carrying forward the Chinese culture. And the establishment of brand will be more meaningful to the social ones. As the most important task of the Overseas Chinese media, the pursuit of the harmonious development of both economic and social benefits will be finally enlightened to a new space by the brand consciousness. This article will start with economic benefits and social benefits, then discuss the importance of the brand consciousness of the Overseas Chinese media on those two sides.
Key words: Brand Overseas Chinese media Economic benefits Social benefits
如下：
随着传媒业的品牌日益激烈的竞争,海外华文媒体的品牌竞争似乎不那么积极,但是.事实上,中国的国际地位不断提升,在世界范围内经济的焦点已经转移东部和海外华人经济的进一步发展,现在是海外华文媒体进入品牌竞争的必然步骤游行.因此,加强品牌意识的重要性的认识,已成为极为紧迫的重要问题,向海外华文媒体.而从其他类型的媒体尊敬,值得一提的是,海外华文媒体一直追求长期而除了经济上的,比如收集中国人民和弘扬中华文化,深刻的社会福利.而对品牌的建立将更有意义的社会的.作为海外华文媒体最重要的任务,对促进两国的经济和社会效益的和谐发展的追求最终将开明到一个新的空间的品牌意识.本文将首先经济效益和社会效益,然后讨论了双方对这些海外华文媒体的品牌意识的重要性.
（我觉得说说重要点也好）