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A Dangerous Killer
We can meet smokers everywhere:at home、in public places and even at school.The population of our earth is 5,800,000,000,and the number of somkers is 1,100,000,000,nearly take 20 percent of the total.Smoking is very harmful.It takes 2,000,000,000,000 dollars and 3,000,000 lives every year.Luckily,people have come to realize the great harm.In 1990,there was 14,3 00,000,000 pounds of tobacoo in the world,and in 1990,the number was reduced to 7 ,000,000,000 pounds.So let’s tell you familiar smokers,smoking is a dangerous killer!Then our air will be more clean,our world will be more beautiful.
A Dangerous Killer
We can meet smokers everywhere:at home、in public places and even at school.The population of our earth is 5,800,000,000,and the number of somkers is 1,100,000,000,nearly take 20 percent of the total.Smoking is very harmful.It takes 2,000,000,000,000 dollars and 3,000,000 lives every year.Luckily,people have come to realize the great harm.In 1990,there was 14,3 00,000,000 pounds of tobacoo in the world,and in 1990,the number was reduced to 7 ,000,000,000 pounds.So let’s tell you familiar smokers,smoking is a dangerous killer!Then our air will be more clean,our world will be more beautiful.
楼主为什么问两遍同样D问题呀~
两个错误~
1.In 1990,there was 14,3 00,000,000 pounds of tobacoo in the world,and in 1990,
是不是打错了~都是1990?
2.Then our air will be more clean,our world will be more beautiful.
clean的比较级是cleaner~不需要more的哦~
两个错误~
1.In 1990,there was 14,3 00,000,000 pounds of tobacoo in the world,and in 1990,
是不是打错了~都是1990?
2.Then our air will be more clean,our world will be more beautiful.
clean的比较级是cleaner~不需要more的哦~