作业帮英语好的进,急,快改!
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英语好的进,急,快改!
文章,修改语法错误,用词不当,主题 If I were …(我写的是If I were some water ）
If i were some water .I would flow to yun nan and other lack water cities.And let the people there drink it.They may can get health .If i were some water .The people in gui zhou would use it to water the farmland .The crops start to grow .they can have some to eat .And they don't worry about hunger .If i were some water .i would try to get more.Let people to use me.Alleviate the lack of water crisis.
Oh ,I woke up .That is a pleasant dream .but everything depends on' if '.If we begin to heal the world ,and everyone can look after their own environment.I think the dream must be ture .Don't forget ' the last drop of water of ours it will be our tear.'
Thank you.
文章,修改语法错误,用词不当,主题 If I were …(我写的是If I were some water ）
If i were some water .I would flow to yun nan and other lack water cities.And let the people there drink it.They may can get health .If i were some water .The people in gui zhou would use it to water the farmland .The crops start to grow .they can have some to eat .And they don't worry about hunger .If i were some water .i would try to get more.Let people to use me.Alleviate the lack of water crisis.
Oh ,I woke up .That is a pleasant dream .but everything depends on' if '.If we begin to heal the world ,and everyone can look after their own environment.I think the dream must be ture .Don't forget ' the last drop of water of ours it will be our tear.'
Thank you.
Yunnan,may后去掉can,And they 前句号改成逗号,小写a.
and let the peple there drink me.
The crops start to grow 改成
The crops can start to grow
have some to eat 改成
have something to eat
Let people to use me去掉to.
Don't forget the last drop of water of ours it will be our tear.可改成
Don't forget the last drop of water of ours or it will be our tears
and let the peple there drink me.
The crops start to grow 改成
The crops can start to grow
have some to eat 改成
have something to eat
Let people to use me去掉to.
Don't forget the last drop of water of ours it will be our tear.可改成
Don't forget the last drop of water of ours or it will be our tears