作业帮心中的烦恼和谁说 （菁菁草老师解答）
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I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey –“who to share my worry?” The main findings are as follows.
9％ of students would like to say their worry to their classmates and friends. 33％ of students are willing to say their worry to their parents and teachers. And 58％ of students who don’t like to share their worry and prefer to overcome difficulties by themselves.
In my opinion, the results of the survey make me very surprised. And what surprises me most is that most students would rather work on problems themselves than share their problems with others. As a teenager, we will have lots of problems, and our experience is not enough, so when we are faced with problems , we should ask some advice for our parents or teachers. Only in this way, we can grow up healthily.
老师您好，我是小于，给出分数和您表达的个别句子。谢谢了
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I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey –“who to share my worry?” The main findings are as follows. 9％ of students would like to say their worry to their classmates and friends. 33％ of students are willing to say their worry to their parents and teachers. And 58％ of students who don’t like to share their worry and prefer to overcome difficulties by themselves. In my opinion, the results of the survey make me very surprised. And what surprises me most is that most students would rather work on problems themselves than share their problems with others. As a teenager, we will have lots of problems, and our experience is not enough, so when we are faced with problems , we should ask some advice for our parents or teachers. Only in this way, we can grow up healthily. 1、注意在百分比of的后面，名词加the，以下的都是同一错误。 2、Say改为tell，以下同。 3、And应该删掉。这里的主语是students，who是定语从句，谓语就应该是prefer了，所以and 是多余的。或者不删掉and的话，可以把who删掉，出现2个并列谓语。 4、词组不当，换成deal with吧。 5、写反了，应该是ask our parents and teachers for advice 6、本来这是个很好的收尾句，only在句首修饰状语的时候，至于主谓要倒装的！所以应该改为only in this way can you …… 7、整体感觉还是不错的！在尝试高级句式的时候难免出错，但是写作的意识很好。加油小于同学！给分17分。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey –“who to share my worry?” The main findings are as follows. 9％ of students would like to say their worry to their classmates and friends. 33％ of students are willing to say their worry to their parents and teachers. And 58％ of students who don’t like to share their worry and prefer to overcome difficulties by themselves. In my opinion, the results of the survey make me very surprised. And what surprises me most is that most students would rather work on problems themselves than share their problems with others. As a teenager, we will have lots of problems, and our experience is not enough, so when we are faced with problems , we should ask some advice for our parents or teachers. Only in this way, we can grow up healthily. 1、注意在百分比of的后面，名词加the，以下的都是同一错误。 2、Say改为tell，以下同。 3、And应该删掉。这里的主语是students，who是定语从句，谓语就应该是prefer了，所以and 是多余的。或者不删掉and的话，可以把who删掉，出现2个并列谓语。 4、词组不当，换成deal with吧。 5、写反了，应该是ask our parents and teachers for advice 6、本来这是个很好的收尾句，only在句首修饰状语的时候，至于主谓要倒装的！所以应该改为only in this way can you …… 7、整体感觉还是不错的！在尝试高级句式的时候难免出错，但是写作的意识很好。加油小于同学！给分17分。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略