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Our school's student association needs to advertise for a foreign student to become our English study consultant . We hoped that your mother language is English and if your Chinese fluent that you have the priority.As an English Studies consultant ，I think that your work is explains the study question for us . Certainly, you must assist us to organize some meaningful English activities . In addition, you only need to work every week for four hours .Certainly, the reward discussed in person.We hoped that you can contact with us as soon as possible .
the contact person: Li Hua
telephone: 13011223344 老师给出分数，辛苦了，谢谢。还有个别您自己表达的句子
the contact person: Li Hua
telephone: 13011223344 老师给出分数，辛苦了，谢谢。还有个别您自己表达的句子
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解题过程：
Our school's student association needs to advertise for a foreign student to become our English study consultant . We hoped that your mother language is English and if your Chinese fluentthat you have the priority.As an English Studies consultant ，I think that your work is explains the study question for us . Certainly, you must assist us to organize some meaningful English activities . In addition, you only need to work every week for four hours .Certainly, the reward discussed in person.We hoped that you can contact with us as soon as possible .
the contact person: Li Hua
telephone: 13011223344 1、 改为Students’ Association 2、 时态错误，改为hope 3、 改为is fluent，并且删掉that，因为已经有if 引导这个从句了。 4、 Is后面不能接谓语，所以改为to explain 5、 Explain sth to sb。不是for 6、 写反了，是four hours every week 7、 Will be discussed 8、 同2、 9、 删掉with，contact是及物动词。不需要介词。 10、 你的英语基础稍微差些，语病比较多。划线部分是精华词句。建议你多背诵下范文，积累常用词句。给分14分。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Our school's student association needs to advertise for a foreign student to become our English study consultant . We hoped that your mother language is English and if your Chinese fluentthat you have the priority.As an English Studies consultant ，I think that your work is explains the study question for us . Certainly, you must assist us to organize some meaningful English activities . In addition, you only need to work every week for four hours .Certainly, the reward discussed in person.We hoped that you can contact with us as soon as possible .
the contact person: Li Hua
telephone: 13011223344 1、 改为Students’ Association 2、 时态错误，改为hope 3、 改为is fluent，并且删掉that，因为已经有if 引导这个从句了。 4、 Is后面不能接谓语，所以改为to explain 5、 Explain sth to sb。不是for 6、 写反了，是four hours every week 7、 Will be discussed 8、 同2、 9、 删掉with，contact是及物动词。不需要介词。 10、 你的英语基础稍微差些，语病比较多。划线部分是精华词句。建议你多背诵下范文，积累常用词句。给分14分。 如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略