作业帮求大神看看这段话有没有什么语法错误
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求大神看看这段话有没有什么语法错误
Japan is located on the eastern coast of the continent of Asia pacific,including Hokkaido,Honshu,Kyushu,Shikoku,4 major islands and more than 6800 other small islands.
Japan is located on the eastern coast of the continent of Asia pacific,including Hokkaido,Honshu,Kyushu,Shikoku,4 major islands and more than 6800 other small islands.
语法错误应该是没有的.
但是“亚洲太平洋海岸”表达不是很自然啊,应该用”the eastern pacific coast of Asia“比较合适.
后面再稍作修改,我觉得这样比较好：
”Japan is located on the eastern pacific coast of Asia,including Hokkaido,Honshu,Kyushu,Shikoku,the 4 major islands ,and more than 6800 other small islands.“
但是“亚洲太平洋海岸”表达不是很自然啊,应该用”the eastern pacific coast of Asia“比较合适.
后面再稍作修改,我觉得这样比较好：
”Japan is located on the eastern pacific coast of Asia,including Hokkaido,Honshu,Kyushu,Shikoku,the 4 major islands ,and more than 6800 other small islands.“