作业帮easy!(作文)
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(从健康饮食,卫生习惯,加强锻炼等方面:以"How to keep healthy ?"写一篇 80 字左右的作文)
Health is very important to people. Our health depends on our eating and living habits. In my opinion the kinds of food that we eat are really important so we should be careful while choosing our food. We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald. Fresh vegetables fruit some meat rice ad noodles are healthy food. Second we should form good eating habits. Three regular meals a day are necessary. We should only eat when we are hungry. Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal. Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.请老师仔细检查此文章是否有错？~并改正！~还有~按中考标准15分满分~您打几分？
Health is very important to people. Our health depends on our eating and living habits. In my opinion the kinds of food that we eat are really important so we should be careful while choosing our food. We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald. Fresh vegetables fruit some meat rice ad noodles are healthy food. Second we should form good eating habits. Three regular meals a day are necessary. We should only eat when we are hungry. Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal. Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.请老师仔细检查此文章是否有错？~并改正！~还有~按中考标准15分满分~您打几分？
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Health is very important to people. Our health depends on our eating and living habits. In my opinion ，the kinds of food that we eat are really important， so we should be careful while choosing our food. We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald. Fresh vegetables ，fruit ，some meat ，rice ad (and ) noodles are healthy food. Second we should form good eating habits. Three regular meals a day are necessary. We should only eat when we are hungry. Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal. Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.
这篇作文写的很好。句子表达没有错误。但要点中要求涉及的从“卫生习惯”这个角度写的较少，还可以在这方面适当补充。可以适当使用过渡性词语，如： firstly, secondly, at last .....同时注意句子中个别标点符号的使用。这篇文章可以给你12分。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Health is very important to people. Our health depends on our eating and living habits. In my opinion ，the kinds of food that we eat are really important， so we should be careful while choosing our food. We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald. Fresh vegetables ，fruit ，some meat ，rice ad (and ) noodles are healthy food. Second we should form good eating habits. Three regular meals a day are necessary. We should only eat when we are hungry. Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal. Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.
这篇作文写的很好。句子表达没有错误。但要点中要求涉及的从“卫生习惯”这个角度写的较少，还可以在这方面适当补充。可以适当使用过渡性词语，如： firstly, secondly, at last .....同时注意句子中个别标点符号的使用。这篇文章可以给你12分。
最终答案：略