作业帮哪位friend能帮我改下我的演讲稿啊...
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哪位friend能帮我改下我的演讲稿啊...
Ladies and Gentlemen:today I am honored to have this opportunity to talk to you.
As we know socity is developing faster and faster and the rounding enviournment also has a great change,so we have a happy life,but I don’t know if you notice (that) people around us are more shlfish and colder to the others.
I still remember a short story which my primary school teacher told me.There are two girls in the same class and they are good friends.One of the children’s family was so poor that she couldn’t buy a green pen,but the art teacher asked them to draw a tree with many leaves in class.She finished the pictures with an pencil and wanted to borrow the green pen from her good friend to colour it.To her surprise ,her friend became another person and just glanced at her to rufused her friend because of her selfish The poor girl was lost,I was lost ,too…
I think (that)something in our heart is real the most important thing,which is facing everything with a warm heart to love!Life is like a mirror.when you smile,people will smile back.when you treat other people kindly,they will treat you kindly in return.when you care about other persons,they will watch out you like what you did.Try to spend one day loving and being kind to everyone you meet.You will see a big difference in your life.If you will become your habits.If everyone trys to do this,the world will be a kinder,brighter,and happier place.Friends,smiles,love,kindful!It’s very easy ,right?I believe you can always do better,and you can always grow.Let’s do it together!Thank you for listening.
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我很想给你多点分的,可是..我的 分太少了,就剩那么多了...哎,希望你能帮我下
Ladies and Gentlemen:today I am honored to have this opportunity to talk to you.
As we know socity is developing faster and faster and the rounding enviournment also has a great change,so we have a happy life,but I don’t know if you notice (that) people around us are more shlfish and colder to the others.
I still remember a short story which my primary school teacher told me.There are two girls in the same class and they are good friends.One of the children’s family was so poor that she couldn’t buy a green pen,but the art teacher asked them to draw a tree with many leaves in class.She finished the pictures with an pencil and wanted to borrow the green pen from her good friend to colour it.To her surprise ,her friend became another person and just glanced at her to rufused her friend because of her selfish The poor girl was lost,I was lost ,too…
I think (that)something in our heart is real the most important thing,which is facing everything with a warm heart to love!Life is like a mirror.when you smile,people will smile back.when you treat other people kindly,they will treat you kindly in return.when you care about other persons,they will watch out you like what you did.Try to spend one day loving and being kind to everyone you meet.You will see a big difference in your life.If you will become your habits.If everyone trys to do this,the world will be a kinder,brighter,and happier place.Friends,smiles,love,kindful!It’s very easy ,right?I believe you can always do better,and you can always grow.Let’s do it together!Thank you for listening.
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我很想给你多点分的,可是..我的 分太少了,就剩那么多了...哎,希望你能帮我下
Ladies and Gentlemen,
It's my honor today to have this opportunity talking to you.
As we all know,our society is developing fast and the enviournment around is also changing greatly.Although we are living a happy life now,you might notice that people around us are becoming more selfish and colder to others.
I still remember a short story which my primary school teacher told me.There were two girls in the same class and they are good friends.One girl's family was so poor that she could't afford buying a green pen,but the art teacher asked them to draw a tree with many leaves in class.She almost finished the drawing with a pencil and wanted to borrow a green pen from the other girl to color it.To her surprise,her friend just glanced at her and refused her request because of selfishness!The poor girl was lost,and I was lost too…
I always believe that the most important thing in our lives is to face everyone and everything with warm hearts,with true love!Life is like a mirror:When you smile,people will smile back; When you treat other people kindly,they will treat you kindly in return; When you care about others,they will watch out you like what you do.Try to spend one day loving and being kind to everyone you meet.You will see a big difference in your life.If this becomes your habits.and if everyone trys to do this,the world will be a kinder,brighter,and happier place.My friends,to smile,to love,to be kind!It's very easy,isn't it?I believe you can always do better,and you can always grow from this.Let's do it together!Thank you for listening.
纠正了几个语法错误,润色了文字.
It's my honor today to have this opportunity talking to you.
As we all know,our society is developing fast and the enviournment around is also changing greatly.Although we are living a happy life now,you might notice that people around us are becoming more selfish and colder to others.
I still remember a short story which my primary school teacher told me.There were two girls in the same class and they are good friends.One girl's family was so poor that she could't afford buying a green pen,but the art teacher asked them to draw a tree with many leaves in class.She almost finished the drawing with a pencil and wanted to borrow a green pen from the other girl to color it.To her surprise,her friend just glanced at her and refused her request because of selfishness!The poor girl was lost,and I was lost too…
I always believe that the most important thing in our lives is to face everyone and everything with warm hearts,with true love!Life is like a mirror:When you smile,people will smile back; When you treat other people kindly,they will treat you kindly in return; When you care about others,they will watch out you like what you do.Try to spend one day loving and being kind to everyone you meet.You will see a big difference in your life.If this becomes your habits.and if everyone trys to do this,the world will be a kinder,brighter,and happier place.My friends,to smile,to love,to be kind!It's very easy,isn't it?I believe you can always do better,and you can always grow from this.Let's do it together!Thank you for listening.
纠正了几个语法错误,润色了文字.