作业帮帮忙检查一段文章,50分谢
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帮忙检查一段文章,50分谢
This is .I am writing to express my interest in the position of .with your company.
After completing the master degree,I have worked in service industry in .for one year.In order to control the credit risk of clients and meet monthly target of settlement of overdue invoices,I shall follow closely with clients and maintain good and stable relationship with them.I am patient,flexible and have excellent communication ability as well as telephone skills to deal with different types of clients.I am a native Mandarin speaker with good command of Cantonese and English,so that I can handle clients of varied backgrounds in South China.
At this stage in my career,I am ready to make the leap to be a ..When seeing this job advertisement,I am excited and believe this is an opportunity for me to realize my prospective career.While at the same time I clearly realize that although I have customer service experience and preformed well on it,I still lack professional training in .,so as a beginner the appropriate position for me may be .,referring to your website.I am confident that as a motivated worker with 'can do' attitude,strong logical analysis and learning ability,I could be a qualified partner soon and fit easily into your company.
In addition,my legal background equipped me with solid knowledge in .industry.For instance,I am familiar with PRC Labor Law,which is deemed to be a necessary qualification for me to be a ..
Please refer to the resume attached to review my background.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications and the possibility of joining your famous firm.I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview.Thanks!
Ps:please send me email instead if I miss your call during office hours.I will reply to you soon.Thank you!
This is .I am writing to express my interest in the position of .with your company.
After completing the master degree,I have worked in service industry in .for one year.In order to control the credit risk of clients and meet monthly target of settlement of overdue invoices,I shall follow closely with clients and maintain good and stable relationship with them.I am patient,flexible and have excellent communication ability as well as telephone skills to deal with different types of clients.I am a native Mandarin speaker with good command of Cantonese and English,so that I can handle clients of varied backgrounds in South China.
At this stage in my career,I am ready to make the leap to be a ..When seeing this job advertisement,I am excited and believe this is an opportunity for me to realize my prospective career.While at the same time I clearly realize that although I have customer service experience and preformed well on it,I still lack professional training in .,so as a beginner the appropriate position for me may be .,referring to your website.I am confident that as a motivated worker with 'can do' attitude,strong logical analysis and learning ability,I could be a qualified partner soon and fit easily into your company.
In addition,my legal background equipped me with solid knowledge in .industry.For instance,I am familiar with PRC Labor Law,which is deemed to be a necessary qualification for me to be a ..
Please refer to the resume attached to review my background.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications and the possibility of joining your famous firm.I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview.Thanks!
Ps:please send me email instead if I miss your call during office hours.I will reply to you soon.Thank you!
文章的表达方式漏洞很大,我在原文里
改了很多细小的地方,你仔细核对一下吧
Dear...,
This is .I am writing to express my interest for the position of .with your company.
After completing the master degree,I have worked in service industry in .for one year.In order to control the credit risk of clients and meet monthly target of settlement of overdue invoices,I shall follow closely with clients and maintain suitable and stable relationship with them.I am patient,flexible and have excellent communication abilities as well as telephone skills which can deal with different types of clients.I am a native Mandarin speaker with good capabilities of Cantonese and English,so that I can handle clients of varied backgrounds in South China.
At this stage in my career,I am ready to make the leap to be a ..When reading this job advertisement,I am excited and believe this is an opportunity for me to realize my prospective career.While at the same time I clearly realize that although I have customer service experience and preformed well on it,I am still lack of professional training in .,so as a beginner,the appropriate position for me may be .,referring to your website.I am confident that as a motivated worker with an attitude of 'can do' ,strong logical analysis and learning ability,I could be a qualified partner soon and fit your companyeasily.
In addition,my legal background equipped me with solid knowledge in .industry.For instance,I am familiar with PRC Labor Law,which is deemed to be a necessary qualification for me to be a ..
Please refer to the resume attached to review my background.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications and the possibility of joining your famous firm.I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview.Thanks!
Ps:please send me email instead if I miss your call during office hours.I will reply to you soon.Thank you!
改了很多细小的地方,你仔细核对一下吧
Dear...,
This is .I am writing to express my interest for the position of .with your company.
After completing the master degree,I have worked in service industry in .for one year.In order to control the credit risk of clients and meet monthly target of settlement of overdue invoices,I shall follow closely with clients and maintain suitable and stable relationship with them.I am patient,flexible and have excellent communication abilities as well as telephone skills which can deal with different types of clients.I am a native Mandarin speaker with good capabilities of Cantonese and English,so that I can handle clients of varied backgrounds in South China.
At this stage in my career,I am ready to make the leap to be a ..When reading this job advertisement,I am excited and believe this is an opportunity for me to realize my prospective career.While at the same time I clearly realize that although I have customer service experience and preformed well on it,I am still lack of professional training in .,so as a beginner,the appropriate position for me may be .,referring to your website.I am confident that as a motivated worker with an attitude of 'can do' ,strong logical analysis and learning ability,I could be a qualified partner soon and fit your companyeasily.
In addition,my legal background equipped me with solid knowledge in .industry.For instance,I am familiar with PRC Labor Law,which is deemed to be a necessary qualification for me to be a ..
Please refer to the resume attached to review my background.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my qualifications and the possibility of joining your famous firm.I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview.Thanks!
Ps:please send me email instead if I miss your call during office hours.I will reply to you soon.Thank you!