修改英语作文Maybe I have a bad feeling ,it's about death .I think
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Maybe I have a bad feeling ,it's about death .
I think go to die is a good way to relax ,to stop studying .I hate study ,because I can't do well in every exam even in study ,and I'm also very lazy .I think it's very bored to study again and again .Though I look so happy all the time ,but is it true of I
I want to have a rest ,have a long rest ,then I don't need to study .But I don't want to stop to play or to stay at home all day ,if I do ,my life will be meaningless .so I only can go to die ,though it will bring my family sadness and make them crazy ,But I still wanting...
Maybe ,I really need to have a rest.
Sunday,April,13th Sunny
A Rainy Day
Today is still a rainy day .
The rainy day continueds some days ,what's wrong with the heaven Is she very sad Why does she cry again and again I think she is suffering from the emotional flu ,maybe in her eyes ,the world isn't the same anymore ,so she cry so lonely and sorrowful .When will she become happy again Maybe if it turn to be sunny ,she will be happy again .
请问,这两篇作文中,是否存在用词错误?还有,哪些地方可以改进?
Maybe I have a bad feeling ,it's about death .
I think go to die is a good way to relax ,to stop studying .I hate study ,because I can't do well in every exam even in study ,and I'm also very lazy .I think it's very bored to study again and again .Though I look so happy all the time ,but is it true of I
I want to have a rest ,have a long rest ,then I don't need to study .But I don't want to stop to play or to stay at home all day ,if I do ,my life will be meaningless .so I only can go to die ,though it will bring my family sadness and make them crazy ,But I still wanting...
Maybe ,I really need to have a rest.
Sunday,April,13th Sunny
A Rainy Day
Today is still a rainy day .
The rainy day continueds some days ,what's wrong with the heaven Is she very sad Why does she cry again and again I think she is suffering from the emotional flu ,maybe in her eyes ,the world isn't the same anymore ,so she cry so lonely and sorrowful .When will she become happy again Maybe if it turn to be sunny ,she will be happy again .
请问,这两篇作文中,是否存在用词错误?还有,哪些地方可以改进?
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