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短文改错。     英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下书信为你同桌

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短文改错。
     英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下书信为你同桌所写,请你对
其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删
除或修改。   
     增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
     删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
     修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
                 2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
     I like music very much, especially pop songs. Every evening then I am doing homework and at
weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar
patterns of notes attracts me into the colorfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the
songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not
like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds
her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music
differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
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                                                                                           1. when
weekends when I∧ at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar
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patterns of notes attracts me into the colorfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the
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 songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not
                                                                          6. on
like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds
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her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music
      8. her                                                                       9. that                         10. ages
differently and enjoy different kinds of music.