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你们班30个同学在8月15日(周日,晴)阻止了一次登泰山活动。当你登到一半时感觉太累,想放弃,在同学们的鼓励之下终于爬到了山顶。你从中受到启发:做事有毅力就会成功。请你据此写一篇日记。 词数100左右,可以根据需要适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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解题过程:
Sunday, August 15th, Sunny
Today we had a wonderful holiday because 30 students in our class organized to climb Taishan Mountain. It was a good trip at the beginning but on the half way I felt exhausted. Unwilling to move any further, I wanted to give it up.However, all the other students came to help me, someone carrying my bag, someone holding my hands and someone encouraging me to keep up. (独立主格结构作状语)With their help, I felt very warm and make every effort to follow. At last we climbed the top of the mountain. As you can expect, all of us were excited and enjoyed ourselves.
Having experienced this, I came to know that nothing in the world is impossible if you can set your mind on it. As you know, where there is a will , there is a way. So I will try my best no matter what difficulty I will meet in the future.
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