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英语改错,找全的发(10个错) 不全的别发 别胡发Last week ,I met a stranger who see

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英语改错,
找全的发(10个错) 不全的别发 别胡发
Last week ,I met a stranger who seemed to be losing .I offered to guide him to a place he wanted to go to ,but to my surprise ,he refused my offer to helping .I asked him why not .He told me that he was afraid I would ask him money if I helped him in this way .Then I fell into deep thoughts :Was it money which came between us I agree that money is become more and more important in our society ,and it should not be everything .We should try my best to help others and trust each other .If everyone does this ,our society will be better and better .
是不是老师改你的作文,要你自己找出10个错处呢.呵
Last week ,I met a stranger who seemed to be losing(losing改lost) .I offered to guide him to a (a改the)place he wanted to go to ,but to my surprise ,he refused my offer to helping(helping改help) .I asked him why not(删去not).He told me that he was afraid I would ask him(加for) money if I helped him in this way .Then I fell into deep thoughts :Was it money which(which改that) came between us I agree that money is(删去is或改成has) become more and more important in our society ,and(and 改but) it should not be everything .We should try my (my改our)best to help others and trust each other .If everyone does this (this改so),our society will be better and better .