作业帮自己写的英语作文,求人帮忙改正初三（老师说要用到现在完成时）
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自己写的英语作文,求人帮忙改正初三（老师说要用到现在完成时）
changes in my hometown
my grandmother has lived in my hometown about fifty years.she has seen the changes in my hometown.
in the past.the building were very small and narrow.but now the building are becoming taller and brighter.the river are more clean than before.most of people went to work by bike or on foot at that time .now more and more people went to work by bus or car .it was difficulty to walk on the old roads.the new ring roads are wide and clean .at that time the living conditions in the city were poor .it have improved a lot now.
the city will be more and more beautiful in the future.
过去 现在
1旧房 新房
2河水肮脏 清澈
3步行骑自行车上班 公交车小汽车上班
4道路狭窄 环形道路宽阔
5居住条件差 居住条件舒适
changes in my hometown
my grandmother has lived in my hometown about fifty years.she has seen the changes in my hometown.
in the past.the building were very small and narrow.but now the building are becoming taller and brighter.the river are more clean than before.most of people went to work by bike or on foot at that time .now more and more people went to work by bus or car .it was difficulty to walk on the old roads.the new ring roads are wide and clean .at that time the living conditions in the city were poor .it have improved a lot now.
the city will be more and more beautiful in the future.
过去 现在
1旧房 新房
2河水肮脏 清澈
3步行骑自行车上班 公交车小汽车上班
4道路狭窄 环形道路宽阔
5居住条件差 居住条件舒适
changes in my hometown
my grandmother has lived in my hometown for about fifty years.she has seen the changes in my hometown.
in the past.the buildings were very small and narrow. but now the buildings have become taller and brighter.the rivers are m cleaner than before.most of people went to work by bike or on foot at that time .now more and more people go to work by bus or car . it was difficult to walk on the old roads.the new ring roads are wide and clean .at that time the living conditions in the city were poor .it has improved a lot now.
the city will be more and more beautiful in the future.
节日快乐!
再问： 老师，为什么more and more people go to work by bus不用现在完成时的
再答： 亲：这是当今经常发生的动作，用一般现在时就行。
my grandmother has lived in my hometown for about fifty years.she has seen the changes in my hometown.
in the past.the buildings were very small and narrow. but now the buildings have become taller and brighter.the rivers are m cleaner than before.most of people went to work by bike or on foot at that time .now more and more people go to work by bus or car . it was difficult to walk on the old roads.the new ring roads are wide and clean .at that time the living conditions in the city were poor .it has improved a lot now.
the city will be more and more beautiful in the future.
节日快乐!
再问： 老师，为什么more and more people go to work by bus不用现在完成时的
再答： 亲：这是当今经常发生的动作，用一般现在时就行。