Last weekend I went to the Summer P

     Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near
a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking
to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the
water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else in need.
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     Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually . At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a
                                                                 1. usually-usual 
lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to
2. while-when   3. hear-heard                                                                                   4. shocking-shocked
find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
                                                                                         5. peoples-people
anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the
                                         6. 去掉 had                                                                  7. but-and 
water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
                                                                                                     8. his- my
I was proud ∧ what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else ∧ in need.
                9. of                                                                                                10.  is