请在周四中午前帮我修正我的英文短文（关于小说的摘要）.

请在周四中午前帮我修正我的英文短文（关于小说的摘要）.
这是我自己看完原文小说后写的故事大纲,但对我而言要转换成英文很困难,
还请各位尽量于中午十二点之前帮我修正一下,
（有部分我还不知道要如何写,还在尝试当中,也希望能翻译一下让我参考.）
【中文】
夺回主权的同时也意味着动物们得开始学会自立更生,
比起人类,动物们工作有时更为辛苦,因为有些机器和工具并不适合动物们的使用.
但三只猪充分发挥了他们的聪明才智,克服了一切的困难.
而动物们也互相合作,于是很快地就完成了全部的收割工作.
动物们对于能够为自己而耕耘而感到相当满足.
所有的动物们都尽自己所能,除了晚到早退的Mollie和时常失踪的猫之外；
Benjamin则是不多干也不少干,也不因钟斯被驱逐而感到高兴.
后来,猪们开始为「动物庄园」制定了旗子和仪式,并成立各种委员会、教育大家认字.
但每当决议下周的工作计画时,Snowball和Napoleon的意见从没一致过,
他们总是争得不可开交,谁也不让谁.
还记得上次消失的牛奶吗?动物们后来发现这些牛奶原来每天都被混杂在猪食当中.
不过猪们说他们是逼不得已的,身为领导者的他们不得不借此保持健康,
所以除了牛奶以外,苹果也必须全送给猪们享用.
动物们无话可说了,就如同Squealer所说的：
「你们当中肯定没有人愿意看到钟斯回来!」
是的,他们绝不希望钟斯回来.
【英文】
夺回主权的同时也意味着动物们得开始学会自立更生,
Sometimes the work was hard,
because the implements had been designed for human beings is not for animals,
but the pigs were so clever that they could think of a way round every difficulty.
而动物们也互相合作,于是很快地就完成了全部的收割工作.
动物们对于能够为自己而耕耘而感到相当满足.
All the animals did their best,除了晚到早退的Mollie和时常失踪的猫之外；
Benjamin则是不多干也不少干,也不因钟斯被驱逐而感到高兴.
Later,the pigs began to institute the flag and theceremony for "Animal Farm",
founded various committees,and teached everybody how to read words.
但每当决议下周的工作计画时,Snowball和Napoleon的意见从没一致过,
他们总是争得不可开交,谁也不让谁.
Do you remember the milk?
It was mixed every day into the pigs' mash.
不过猪们说他们是逼不得已的,身为领导者的他们不得不借此保持健康,
所以除了牛奶以外,苹果也必须全送给猪们享用.
The animals have nothing to say,
As Squealer said:" Surely,there is no one among you who wants to see Jones come back!"
yes,they really don't wants to see Jones come back.

Claiming back their authority also meant that the animals had to start living independently.
Sometimes,the work was harder for the animals than for human beings because the machinery and equipment were not designed to suit animals' use.
However,the pigs fully unleashed their intelligence,and they were able to overcome all kinds of difficulties.
Meanwhile,the animals work in cooperation,and they completed the harvesting jobs in no time.
The animals were satisfied that they were able to fend for themselves.
All the animals did their best,except for the unpunctual Mollie and the cat who was always nowhere to be found.
As for Benjamin,he did nothing more or less,and he didn't seem to be happy for the expulsion of Jones.
Later,the pigs started establishing the flag and ceremony for the animal farm.They founded various committees and educated everyone on literacy skills.
However,everytime they were planning on the work plan for the following weeks,Snowball and Napolean could never come to an agreement.
Their disputes were always intense and they would never compromise.
Could you recall the milk that had vanished last time?Well,the animals later found out that it was mixed into the pigs' food everyday.
The pigs defended themselves,saying that they had to do so because as leaders they must maintain their health.
Therefore,other than milk,all the apples must also be submitted for the pigs' consumption.
The animals had no words for this.As quoted from Squealer:"None of you would want to see Jones back for sure."
It's true,they never wanted to see Jones back.