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求教英语作文.There was once a boy,he like movies very much,So,his

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求教英语作文.
There was once a boy,he like movies very much,So,his dream isbe a star,a hollywodd movie star.these are just a dream,but his and dream instead.there are many people laughing at him,because some reson
the boy named Sam is my friend.Evey day he study hard,expecting to make progress.he said:"although not achieve the dream,but i do not give up!" I would also like him because he was like as somebody
有什么要改进的吗?觉得太单调了.
There is a boy,who likes movies very much,So,his dream is to be a star,a hollywodd movie star.However it is really just a dream.There are many people laughing at him because they think it's impossible.The boy named Sam is my friend.Eveyday he studies very hard,expecting to make a progress.He once said:"although I may not achieve the dream,I'll never give up!" I would also like to be as hardworking as him!这个不太适合用过去时写,因为他现在也还有这个梦,一直努力学.
再问: 这样的故事会不会太单调了? 估计能拿多少分?
再答: 有点 你读初几还是?
再问: 其实这也大概是我的故事,我读初三。想向老师表明内心的那份不甘。
再答: There is a boy, who likes movies very much,so,his dream is to be a star, a hollywodd movie star. However it is really difficult for him to achieve. And there are many people laughing at him because they think it's impossible. The boy's name is Sam and he's my friend. Eveyday he studies very hard,expecting to make a progress. He once said:"although I may not achieve the dream in the end, I'll never give up anyway!" I would also like to be as hardworking as him because I konw no matter how difficult it is to achieve our dreams, it is always worth it! 这么改你看看行不行
再问: 可我还是觉得故事太单调了。