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英语 短文改错one day,i was cookinh in the kitchen while the teleph

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英语 短文改错
one day,i was cookinh in the kitchen while the telephone rang.i went to answer it immediately.she was my close friend,Lisa.when we were talking on a phone,the fire alarm sounded.i run back to the kitchen.the room was full smoke and the beef was bad burnt.i quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows.and then went out of the house.to my great surprises,two fire engines were outside my house.i was rather worried.i told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke一共有十处错误!大小写不算!
one day,i was cookinh in the kitchen while【1.改为when】 the telephone rang.i went to answer it immediately.she 【2.改为 It 】was my close friend,Lisa.when we were talking on a【3.改为 the 】 phone,the fire alarm sounded.i run 【4.改为 ran 】back to the kitchen.the room was full 【5.加 of 】smoke and the beef was bad【6.改为 badly 】 burnt.i quickly turned off the gas,opening 【7.改为 opened 】all the windows.and then went out of the house.to my great surprises【8.改为 surprise 】,two fire engines were outside my house.i was rather worried.i told about【9.去掉 about 】 the firemen that it was my careless cooking which【10.改为 that 】 caused the heavy smoke