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短文改错ADear Jim I'd like to tell you something more about our

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Dear Jim
I'd like to tell you something more about our school
sports meet.It was holding on Oct 6,which was a
fine day.There were over 1,000 students and teachers
attend it.Wang Lin,a student from my class won the
100-meter race.He finish the race in 12.6 seconds
and broke in the school record.The spots meet
was really success.That Was because we were
all trying to do my best.
Althought I Was not one of the winner, I
Was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter
Yours,
Li Ping
B
A group of scientists were planning to go
to countryside to do a scientific research in order to
find out that whether the environment of the country
had polluted.On arrival,they started to check the
air and water.To our surprise,they found
how terribly the situation Was.They could see
the serious pollution.Look into the cause,
they persuade the government to pass the law
to protect environment and kept the balance of
nature. Now everything has changed. Birds are
singing while tree and grass are waving.
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Dear Jim
I'd like to tell you something more about our school
sports meet.It was holding(holden) on Oct 6,which was a
fine day.There were over 1,000 students and teachers
attend (attending)it.Wang Lin,a student from(of) my class won the
100-meter race.He finish(finished) the race in 12.6 seconds
and broke in(in删除) the school record.The spots meet
was really success(successful).That Was (was)because we were
all trying to do my (our)best.
Althought I Was (was)not one of the winner(winners), I
Was(was) proud of that(that变成what) we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter
Yours,
Li Ping
B
A group of scientists were planning to go
to countryside to do a scientific research in order to
find out that (that删除)whether the environment of the country
had(been) polluted.On arrival,they started to check the
air and water.To our(their) surprise,they found
how terribly(terrible) the situation Was.They could see
the serious pollution.Look(looking) into the cause,
they persuade(persuaded) the government to pass the law
to protect(the) environment and kept the balance of
nature. Now everything has (been)changed. Birds are
singing while tree and grass are waving.