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快告诉我怎么改我的英语作文,哪错了.不必太啰嗦,house.kuai yaaaa

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快告诉我怎么改我的英语作文,哪错了.不必太啰嗦,house.kuai yaaaa
会追加分的.
My house
Welcome to my house!
Look!There are three rooms in my house.The biggest one is our living room.There is a big sofa between two small sofas.They are all orange and very comfortable.A small table is In front of the big sofa,many fruits are on it.A TV set is across the big sofa,and a fridge is near the TV.
This is my parents’ bedroom.A double bed is next to the dresser.The very big wardrobe is across the bed,and beside the plant.
The smallest room is my bedroom.It is a beautiful room.The wall is pink.My bed is blue and it is near my bed.My bookcase is behind my bed,because my room is too,I have to put my bookcase beside my bed!But in this way,I can take down the books when I lie down the bed.
What a lovely house!I love it very much!
写的是我的家,(客厅和两个卧室)主要是方位.谢拉!
周一后就交作业了!13,14号以就不给追加分了/!在Welcome to my house!后面加一句:my house is not big,but I love it very much!
快告诉我怎么改我的英语作文,哪错了.不必太啰嗦,题目是my house.kuai yaaaa
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会追加分的.
My house
Welcome to my house!
Look!There are three rooms in my house.The biggest one is our living room.There is a big sofa between two small sofas.They are all orange and very comfortable.A small table is In(改 in) front of the big sofa,many fruits are on it(改成with many fruits on it).A TV set is across the big sofa,and(改成while) a fridge is near the TV.
This is my parents’ bedroom.A double bed is next to the dresser.The very big wardrobe is across the bed,and beside the plant.
The smallest room is my bedroom.It is a beautiful room.The wall is pink.My bed is blue and it is near my bed.My bookcase is behind my bed,because my room is too(这句有问题),I have to put my bookcase beside my bed!But in this way,I can take down the books when I lie down (改成whenever I lie on)the bed.
What a lovely house!I love it very much!