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希望老师进快评一下!急!英语作文

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要一篇关于我的家庭,学校和爱好的作文。第一段写家庭,第二段写自己,第三段写学校。谢谢。有急用!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
解题思路: 根据题目要求进行合理的构思,然后用自己熟悉的短语、句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来。写作时应多用简单句,注意上下句的逻辑关系,适当使用关联词语,是文章层次分明,过渡自然。思路要清晰,句子结构要正确,单词书写要准确。
解题过程:
There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a worker,He always works hard in the factory. My mother is a teacher, She loves her students . I love my family forever!
My name is Liu ping . I'm a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city .
My favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well. But I like it. I also like sports very much ,such as, running, volleyball and so on.
I like making friends,too . OK. This is me .A sunny girl.
My school is big. It is nice and clean.There are many flowers in my school.The playground is near the teaching buliding.There are many good teachers in my school. I like my school very much.
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最终答案:略