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I’ve got lots of friends,but one of my best friends is Emma.We have known each other since we were 4 years old and we were in the same class for 8 years.
She is a lovely girl with two big eyes and a long hair and she is neither fat nor thin.She’s got lots of hobbies,such as painting,shopping and many more.And she can not only play the piano,but also swimming very well.Writing made her success because she has already written a book about her life.In the book,she has dreamt that she has became a visitor and flown to every place all over the world.Because of this book,she feels happier than before.
Although she is successful,we’ve still played together and we usually see our teacher in the spare time.
This is my best friend,a lovely girl with literary talent.
I’ve got lots of friends,and one of my best friends is Emma.We have known each other since we were 4 years old and we were in the same class for 8 years.
She is a lovely girl with two big eyes and long hair and she is not too fat and not too thin.She’s got lots of hobbies,such as painting,shopping and so on.she can play the piano,and also swimming very well.Writing made her success because she has already written a book about her life.In the book,she has dreamed that she has became a visitor and flown to every place all over the world.Because of this book,she feels happier than before.
Although she is successful,we’ve still played together and we usually visit our teacher in the spare time.
This is my best friend,a lovely girl with literary talent.
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