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Eat,have fun and learn in Canal Mall Cancl Mall is a great place for the family to have fun on weekends.Teenagers would like to visit a garden on the 7th floor where the air is very fresh.Kids will enjoy playing games at the game center where there are many different kinds of games. There is also a lot for parents in Canal Mall.While the children have fun,parents can go shopping in the underground supermarket where things are both good and cheap.And they can watch a movie with children at cinema on the 7th floor,If parents want to eat western food , they can find it at Pizza Hut,an Italian restaurant which is famous for its pizza.And everyone can learn something in Canal Mall,Teenagers enjoy reading books at the bookstore on the 5th floor. How relaxing they are.Welcome to the Canal Mall.

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The air is very fresh on the 7th floor.
While the children are having fun,
An italian restaurant is famous for its pizza.
How relaxed they are!
well done.you wrote very well .come on.
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