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pls kindly point out the mistake i made in the following article.thanks!
My wife gave birth to my son on 2nd,March,2006.up to now,he has been living in Dongguan for over six years.one year ago ,however,we once tired to send him back to my old home in Hunan to go to primary school.but he just stayed there for few months.For even though it was still autumn there,it was quit cool and the temperaure has dropped to 1-2 degrees above zero centigrade.sometimes you can even see frots on the leaves.people have to wear two pieces of suit in the morning and evening.hwoever,in the same season in Dongguan,it is still very hot,the sun always shines and rarely rains,with average high temperatures around 80.He was unaccustomed to the weather .from the monment he arrived there,he kept on caughing and never got well.in the end,it was more than we could bear,we had hardly had time to settle down than we left there and took him back to GuangDong.the idea which we had for two years ended there.
翻译:请指出我在(下文)文章中犯的错误(此处错误应该是指文法).
再问: 不是要翻译,而是要指出文中错误包括时态,语法等等。