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No drunk driving
Nowadays,the problem of drunk driving is becoming more and more serious all over the world,which may cause more traffic accidents happen.
Generally speaking,the main reason for drunk driving is that many drivers are not fully aware of the danger of driving after drinking.Otherwise,when people attend in a party where they will drink much wine.Then,they may continue to drive.
It's necessary to punish drunk driving.For one thing,the governments should make some laws about it.For another,the public should be educated about the harmfulness of drunk driving and the importance of traffic safety.
For the sake of safety of yourself and for the happiness of your family never drinking before driving in your life!
Thanks^ ^
No drunk driving
Nowadays,the problem of drunk driving is becoming more and more serious all over the world,which may cause more traffic accidents happen.
Generally speaking,the main reason for drunk driving is that many drivers are not fully aware of the danger of driving after drinking.Otherwise,when people attend in a party where they will drink much wine.Then,they may continue to drive.
It's necessary to punish drunk driving.For one thing,the governments should make some laws about it.For another,the public should be educated about the harmfulness of drunk driving and the importance of traffic safety.
For the sake of safety of yourself and for the happiness of your family never drinking before driving in your life!
Thanks^ ^
attend in a paty改成join a party
governments改成government
governments改成government