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英语改错,Mary and I went to the People's Park on this 1._______m

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英语改错,
Mary and I went to the People's Park on this 1._______
morning to fly a kite.We got a very nice kite,and 2._______
it was so a lovely day.So we were sure to have a 3._______
lot of funs.Once the kite went up into the sky,I 4._______
began to run very fast.I hoped that it will go higher 5.————
and higher.Then suddenly I felt anything wrong.6.————
Looking up into the sky,I was disappointing to find 7.————
that the kite had broken bad.Then Mary comforted 8.————
me,say,"Now,you know what makes a kite fly high?9.————
It's patience and skills."Yes,I've learned good lesson.10.————
(请把原因也打上,
我帮你做做看,但不知道对几个,给你参考一下:
1、on改为in(in the morning为固定的结构)
2、对的
3、so 改为such(such a lovely day意为如此美好的一天)
4、funs改为 fun(不可数,不需要加s)
5、will改为would(一方面是一个过去式,另一方面是一个虚拟的语气,所以用would)
6、anything改为 something(既不是否定,也不是疑问,所以是something wrong,出了一些问题)
7、disappointing改为disappointed (disappointing是令人失望的,一般是物做主语,disappointed是失望的,一般人做主语)
8、had broken 改为 had been broken (风筝是被弄坏的,不会它自己坏掉,所以是被动语态)
9、say改为said(过去式)
10、learned后面加 a(一节有意义的课,前面应加冠词a)