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Dear Mary, I'm in trouble now. I think smoking makes me cool. I didn't like smoking before but now I come to like the smell of the smoke.I often smoke after school. I want to give it up but I can't help smoking every day.Can you give me some advice to quit smoking? yours, Lily 假如你是Mary,请给Lily写一封回信,在信中表明你的态度,说明理由并提出建议,最后提出希望. Dear Lily, I'm glad to receive your letter.As we know,somking harms our health. yours, Lily
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解题过程:
Dear Lily,
I'm glad to receive your letter.As we know,somking harms our health. If you smoke for a long time, perhaps it makes you get seriously ill. Even worse, smoking can cause lung cancer. Every year many people die of smoking. It's so terrible.
On the other hand, smoking makes others , including your family and friends, forced to breathe second-hand smoke, which is likely for them to keep away from you. Besides, buying cigarettes will cost you lots of money. If you can give it up, you can save the money to buy what you want to, such as useful books and beautiful dresses.
I believe you are an active and confident child and you can give it up soon. Please stop smoking! Live a happy life!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mary
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