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英语翻译帮我看一下有没有地方需修改...We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu r

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英语翻译
帮我看一下有没有地方需修改...
We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently.Unexpently we found that the artwork was broken badly.We are not sure if you can fix it ,please find the attachment of the photos for your refrence.If you still need the actual sample for the artwork,please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.
◆以下分句修改较容易参照对比:
We have received the artwork of Mr.Liu recently.
===We received the artwork of Mr.Liu days ago.
Unexpently we found that the artwork was broken badly.
===Unfortunately,we found that the artwork was badly damaged.
We are not sure if you can fix it ,please find the attachment of the photos for your refrence.
===We wonder if you're able to fix it,please find the attachment of the photos for your reference.(原“refrence”拼字有误)
If you still need the actual sample for the artwork,please tell us the shipping information so I can arrange shipment as soon as possible.
===If you do need the sample itself for the artwork,please tell us the shipping information so that we can arrange the shipment ASAP.Thanks!(注意前面用了"us"后面的主语就要用"we"而不是“I”,才能一致)