作业帮英语作文Dear Mum 帮我看看那里有错 或 语法不对
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英语作文Dear Mum 帮我看看那里有错 或 语法不对
Dear Mun,
want to say thank you to you.So many come to have been takling care of me ,every
day to me meticulously bless.I have grown up,should attempting to do some houseworks.Is not guarding always I ,believe me ,I walked I also want to tell you I love you,but I am a little shy.How can I say this to you?I don’t know .Now I will study hard and help you at home.hope I can look after you in your old age,just like you've looked after me.
Your loving daughter,
最后是 Your loving son
你们都太好了
Dear Mun,
want to say thank you to you.So many come to have been takling care of me ,every
day to me meticulously bless.I have grown up,should attempting to do some houseworks.Is not guarding always I ,believe me ,I walked I also want to tell you I love you,but I am a little shy.How can I say this to you?I don’t know .Now I will study hard and help you at home.hope I can look after you in your old age,just like you've looked after me.
Your loving daughter,
最后是 Your loving son
你们都太好了
我帮你改了改,其中几个句子我看不明白,给你换了一种表达方式,还有这句Is not guarding always I,我不知道你要表达什么意思,给你删去了.有的句子缺少成分给你添上去了,以下就是,仅供参考.
Dear Mum,
I want to say thank you to you. Over the years, you have been takling care of me. You pray to God for health to me everyday. Because I have grown up, I should attempt to do some housework. I also want to tell you I love you, but I am a little shy. How can I say this to you? I don’t know . From now on,I will study hard and help you do some housework. I hope that I can look after you in your old age, just as you've looked after me.
Dear Mum,
I want to say thank you to you. Over the years, you have been takling care of me. You pray to God for health to me everyday. Because I have grown up, I should attempt to do some housework. I also want to tell you I love you, but I am a little shy. How can I say this to you? I don’t know . From now on,I will study hard and help you do some housework. I hope that I can look after you in your old age, just as you've looked after me.