英语翻译My birthdayMy birthday is in June 21,that is,yesterdayYe

英语翻译
My birthday
My birthday is in June 21,that is,yesterday
Yesterday I was very happy,my friends come to my birthday party
They help me to decorate a room,very beautiful,I like it very much.
On a small table,is they send birthday gift,I love to eat chocolate,and I love the little bear doll for a long time.
Little bear doll is pink,its ears have a bowknot,is I like blue.
In addition,mom and dad gave me a cake is very delicious,is a large fruit cake.I and my friends are very like.
We also play games together,mom funny appearance make you more happy.
Yesterday,I really very happy,and my friends.
Can I thank them very much and my birthday together.
Dear Ann gave me a very nice cream cakes.
Worse,I don't like cream cakes

My birthday is in June 21,that was,yesterday
Yesterday I was very happy,my friends came to my birthday party
They helped me to decorate a room,very beautiful,I liked it very much.
On a small table,was they sent birthday gift,I loved to eat chocolate,and I loved the little bear doll for a long time.
Little bear doll was pink,its ears had a bowknot,was I liked blue.
In addition,mom and dad gave me a cake was very delicious,was a large fruit cake.I and my friends were very like.
We also played games together,mom funny appearance made you more happy.
Yesterday,I was really very happy,and my friends.
Could I thank them very much and my birthday together.
Dear Ann gave me a very nice cream cakes.
Worse,I didn't like cream cakes
这是练习还是自己写的?语意不连贯,我只照着你的要求做了,别的没动
再问： 自己写的，那能不能请你把错的地方改下
再答： I was born in June 21, so yesterday was my birthday.
Yesterday I was very happy, because lots of my friends came to my birthday party
They helped me to decorate my room, which became very beautiful, and I liked it very much.
On a small table, there was the birthday gifts from my friends. I loved the chocolate and the little bear doll, which were both the gifts they sent to me.
Little bear doll was pink, and she wear a blue bowknot, which color was my favourite.
In addition, mom and dad gave me a cake which was a large delicious fruit cake. I and my friends loved it very much.
We also played games together, mom's funny appearance made us happier.
Yesterday, I was really happy, and my friends too.
I shoud thank them very much to provide me a good birthday party.
Dear Ann gave me a very nice cream cake. What a pity, I didn't like cream cake.

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