这篇是要写一段叙述的文章.然后谁能帮我看看Topic sentence 写的对不对能改的话最好.还有结束语

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这篇是要写一段叙述的文章.然后谁能帮我看看Topic sentence 写的对不对能改的话最好.还有结束语
I have spent a great time with my friends on the three days weekend.On the first day,
we went to the Hollywood at 10:30 A.M.There were alot of peoplewaiting on the line.Fortunately,
we were the VIP,so we don't have to waited in that long line.At 3 P.M,we had a awesome meal in the Cheese Cake
Factory.Then we went back to home.The second day,we went to the long beach.The sand from the beach was very soft,
so we lyied our body down to the sand and took a nap.A bout 30 mintunes later,one of my friends proposed to play
beach volleyball,so rented a volleyball,and we played it for few hours.At the night,We watched the Kong Fu Panda
in the AMC theather.Last day of the holiday weenkend,my girl friend and I went to the MACY'S Shopping Center.I bought
her a Teddy Bear,and she gave me a kiss.Then we go back to my house,and we cooked and ate the dinner together.

1a lot of people waiting 2lyied改成lay去掉 our body , to the sand改成 on the sand . 3A bout 改成About. 4so rented 改成so we rented 5At the night改成At night6Last day改成on the last day
Topic sentence My 3-Day Holiday
结束语What a tiring happy holiday!

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