英语翻译需要通顺的翻译When I asked my daughter which item she would kee

英语翻译
需要通顺的翻译
When I asked my daughter which item she would keep; the phone,the car,the cooker,the computer,the TV,or her boyfriend,she said“the phone”.Personally,I could do without the phone entirely,which makes me unusual.Because the telephone is changing our lives more than any other piece of technology.
Point 1 The telephone creates the need to communicate,in the same way that more roads create more traffic.My daughter comes home from school at 4:00 pm and then spends an hour on the phone talking to the very people she has been at school with all day.If the phone did not exist,would she have anything to talk about?
Point 2 The mobile phone means that we are never alone.“The mobile saved my life,”says Crystal Johnstone.She had an accident in her Volvo on the A45 between Otley and Skipton.Trapped inside,she managed to make the call that brought the ambulance(救护车) to her rescue.
Point 3 The mobile removes our secret.It allows marketing manager of Haba Deutsch,Carl Nicolaisen,to ring his sales staff all round the world at and time of day to ask where they are ,where they are going,and how their last meeting went.
Point 4 The telephone separates us.Antonella Bramante in Rome says,“We worked in separate offices but I could see him through the window.It was easy to get his number.We were so near——but we didn’t meet for the first two weeks!”
Point 5 The telephone allows us to reach out beyond our own lives.Today we can talk to several complete strangers simultaneously ( 同时地) on chat lines (at least my daughter does.I wouldn’t know what to talk about).We can talk across the world.We can even talk to astronauts (if you know any) while they’re space-walking.And,with the phone line hooked up to the computer,we can access(存取) the Internet,the biggest library on Earth.

当我问我女儿她会要哪一项：在手机,汽车,电磁炉,电脑,电视,还是她的男友时,她说：“手机”.就个人而言,我可以做事,在完全没有电话时,这使我不寻常.因为电话比任何一项技术都能改变我们的生活.
第1点 电话创造了必要的沟通,以同样的方式创造更多更多的道路交通.我的女儿从学校回家,然后在下午4:00就花了交谈,她整天都在与学校非常人一个小时的电话.如果手机不存在,将她有什么好谈的?
第2点的移动电话,就是我们永远不会孤单. “移动救了我的生活,”水晶约翰斯通说.她在她的沃尔沃在A45高速公路之间奥特利和斯基普顿事故.被困在里面,她设法使调用所带来的救护车（救护车）,以救她.
第三点,流动删除我们的秘密.它允许销售哈巴德语,卡尔尼古拉森,他的销售经理,所有工作人员环轮和一天的时间在世界上问他们在哪里,哪里去,以及如何最后一次会议了.
第4点的电话分开我们.安东尼在罗马布拉曼特说,“我们一直在单独的办公室,但我可以透过窗户看到他.这是很容易得到他的电话号码.我们这么近 - 但我们没有满足前两个星期!“
第5点的电话使我们能够超越我们自己的生活了.今天,我们可以谈几个完全陌生的同时（同时地）上线聊天（至少我的女儿一样.我不知道该怎么谈）.我们可以谈世界各地.我们甚至可以谈论的宇航员（如果您知道的话）,当他们的空间行走.而且,挂接到电脑的电话线,我们可以访问（存取）互联网,地球上最大的图书馆.