作业帮请大神帮我点评一下这段英语用句
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请大神帮我点评一下这段英语用句
本人是高二学生,写下了这段英语作文中的片段,希望大家能够帮我准确的点评,让我知道自己的问题,真的很感谢.
As we seen,there are many virtue things in society.A man who loves doing virtue things is helpful and kind.They do this helpful things for free and give people who need help warm and concerned.The virtue of helping others is good for us to study.It sets a example in our minds.
I think that we are helpful from few things.The society will be warmer and warmer.The future will be lighter and lighter.
virtue 美德
希望大神们不要直译,如果可以,逐句点评,或挑选几句来点评,主要是针对句子结构,句式方面的,我都很欢迎并心怀感谢,期待有各种针对性和奇葩的点评和见解~
本人是高二学生,写下了这段英语作文中的片段,希望大家能够帮我准确的点评,让我知道自己的问题,真的很感谢.
As we seen,there are many virtue things in society.A man who loves doing virtue things is helpful and kind.They do this helpful things for free and give people who need help warm and concerned.The virtue of helping others is good for us to study.It sets a example in our minds.
I think that we are helpful from few things.The society will be warmer and warmer.The future will be lighter and lighter.
virtue 美德
希望大神们不要直译,如果可以,逐句点评,或挑选几句来点评,主要是针对句子结构,句式方面的,我都很欢迎并心怀感谢,期待有各种针对性和奇葩的点评和见解~
咩.汝语法还是有点错误啊.比如一开始是As we see.virtue就是善行.不可数名词.译为美德则可数.其他还有几个意思.不常考.汝想知道可以度娘下.不需要things 了比较好.warm名词的意思是.温暖的地方.此处应为warmth.温暖.热情.暖和的意思.concerned词性也不对.应为concern.The virtue of helping others is good for us to study我建议把is good for 改成is worth learning.= =额.我刚百度的时候.例句里.be good for后面都是直接加名词的.还有.或许汝的句意是想说.这是个对于我们来说很好的去学习的.强调好而不是作为词组来用的话.good就显得比较普通的.可以换成precious. I think that we are helpful from few things.The society will be warmer and warmer前半句没太看懂.be helpful to：对xx有帮助
be helpful for sth：为了sth乐意帮忙 from在helpful的词组里有这个用法吗?我不太清楚.
个人写作文不太这样用.如果是我的话.会说.As the result of the fact that kindness（这里可以换成其他更好的合适的词.你懂得） always go hand in hand with welfare , it's suggested that the more we devote to the society , the more beautiful it will be .这个句型呢.可以改造之后套用到其他作文中.很好的我觉得.the future will be lighter and lighter . 想到light这个单词.我想你可以在此处换成resplendent璀璨的,glorious辉煌的,prosperous繁荣的.（繁荣的话.作为未来这个词的定语不合适.换成society可以用这个~~）
恩.有事继续问哈~~
be helpful for sth：为了sth乐意帮忙 from在helpful的词组里有这个用法吗?我不太清楚.
个人写作文不太这样用.如果是我的话.会说.As the result of the fact that kindness（这里可以换成其他更好的合适的词.你懂得） always go hand in hand with welfare , it's suggested that the more we devote to the society , the more beautiful it will be .这个句型呢.可以改造之后套用到其他作文中.很好的我觉得.the future will be lighter and lighter . 想到light这个单词.我想你可以在此处换成resplendent璀璨的,glorious辉煌的,prosperous繁荣的.（繁荣的话.作为未来这个词的定语不合适.换成society可以用这个~~）
恩.有事继续问哈~~