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《step up》 is a Music movie.Someone said it’s bad but I think it’s successful.It is exciting for me to watch the movie because of the music and dance inside.There are a lot of music and dance in it.the music is terribly wonderful,the dance is also very cool.I like the movie very well not only because the musci and dance but also it’s story.The film is not a lot of lines,but just right.It says a girl and a boy who likes dancing and work hard to get suceess at last.So I have learned who works hard who can get suceess.And I also have learned to pursue dream and never give up.
帮我找下.其中的语法错误或者语句不通出即可.
《step up》 is a Music movie.Someone said it’s bad but I think it’s successful.It is exciting for me to watch the movie because of the music and dance inside.There are a lot of music and dance in it.the music is terribly wonderful,the dance is also very cool.I like the movie very well not only because the musci and dance but also it’s story.The film is not a lot of lines,but just right.It says a girl and a boy who likes dancing and work hard to get suceess at last.So I have learned who works hard who can get suceess.And I also have learned to pursue dream and never give up.
因改成这样如下：《step up》 is a Music movie.Someone said it’s bad but I think it’s successful.It is exciting for me to watch the movie because of the music and dance inside.There are a lot of music and dance in it.the music is terribly wonderful,the dance is also very cool.I like the movie very well not only because the musci and dance but also it’s story.The film is not a lot of lines,but just right.It says a girl and a boy who likes dancing and work hard to get suceess at last.So I have learned who works hard who can get suceess.