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The fans waited anxiously in the rain for totally 2 hours th

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The fans waited anxiously in the rain for totally 2 hours then the super girl just showed up.
请问这句话有语病吗?如有请帮忙修正,
waited 短暂行的和for 2 hours 一段时间不匹配
then 用的不好
修改如下:
after the fans had been waiting anxiously in the rain for totally 2 hours,the super girl just showed up