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帮忙修改下初中英语演讲比赛稿 感激不尽
How to improve our English
Good afternoon,Ladies and gentlemen.Today,I’d like to talk about“How to improve our English”.To be honest,I’m really happy to stand here and say something about learning English,even if I’m only a beginner of English.
As everybody knows.English is an international language.What’s more China has entered the World Trade Organization.Therefore it’s necessary for us to learn it.But“how can I improve my English” you may ask.Well,I have some useful tips that I’d like to share with you.
Firstly,make sure that you pay enough attention to your pronunciation and intonation.Otherwise,you might make yourself a laughing stock.For example,“Can I use your bike?”you say,“Can I use your back?”“Pass me the case,please”.you say,“pass me the kiss,please” Obviously,here you mispronounced the two words “bike”and “case”.That will certainly cause misunderstanding.Besides,tones of different voice can also mean difference.For instance,“London bridge is falling down,fall- ing down,my fair Lady”,“London bridge is falling down!”you are excited,again“London bridge is falling down,falling down,my fair Lady”,“London bridge is falling down”you are so sad,right?
Secondly,practice makes perfect.Don’t be afraid to make mistakes when you practise speaking English.On one hand,you will learn from them,On the other hand,no one can avoid making mistakes,so don’t be shy,try to be thickskinned and speak up
Finally,in order to improve our English,we need to be patient ,Anyway,learning English takes time,so you must have a strong will and enough patience,Recember“Rome was not built in a day ”
That’s all .thank you for your time.
看看有没有语法错误之类的
说实在的,这真是一篇很好的英语演讲稿.语法方面没有什么错误,只是在句子上我向你提一些意见,只是意见而已.For example,“Can I use your bike?”you say,“Can I use your back?”“Pass me the case,please”.you say,“pass me the kiss,please” 其中的you say 最好改成you might say,表示猜测,你会说.因为别人不一定就会犯这样的错误,只是举例而已,所以推测一下别人会这么说.