这是我的英语四级口语考试自我介绍.希望把它改得更创新,至少多点运用语法从句.

这是我的英语四级口语考试自我介绍.希望把它改得更创新,至少多点运用语法从句.
Self-introduce
Good morning.My name is Luo wenming,majored
in physics.From a middle class family,I was born in Foshan,Guangdongon March,1994.My father is a doctor,as are all my family.Although I am the
youngest child of my parents,I am by no men a spoiled one.On the contrary,I
have been expected to be a successful man with advanced education.I study hard
at school.Besides texts knowledge,table tennis is my favorite; whenever
playing,my heart is filled with excitement.
“God helps those who help themselves.” My father adopts the idea of his father.
Besides in farming,especially in study,I realized it more precisely.
I began to study diligently when I was 9.I
started in my early age,because I had learned the importance of English.I
hope that I could pass the test.And this is my best wish at the moment.

Good morning. My name is Luo wenming. I major in physics. I am from a middle class family, I was born in Foshan,Guangdongon on March, 1994. My father is a doctor, so do other members in my family. Although I am the youngest child in my family, no one ever spoils me. Instead, I
have been expected to be a successful man with advanced education. I study hard
at school. In addition to academic subjects, table tennis is my favorite. Whenever
playing, my heart is filled with excitement.
“God helps those who help themselves.” My father adopts the idea from his father.
Besides in farming, especially in study, I realized it more precisely. (Not really sure what you mean in this paragraph..)
I began to study diligently when I was 9. I started studying English in my early age, because I have learned the its importance. I hope that I can pass the test. And this is my best wish at this moment.
再问： 可以就我的情况，帮我重新写一篇自我介绍吗？多点分给你
再答： Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Luo wenming. I am currently major in Physics. (如果你已经修完了，你就写 I majored in Physics before.)All of my family members are doctors and I am following their steps.(如果你不要成为医生就删掉好了) I was born in Foshan, Guangdong on March, 1994. I am the youngest child in my family but no one ever spoils me or forces me to do what I do not like to do. However, they do expected me to be a successful man in future. Not wanting to disappoint my family, I begin to study diligently when I was nine-year-old. I study and work hard in order to meet their expectations.