英语翻译This moring my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed

英语翻译
This moring my cousin ran to my house,crying.She seemed very sadly.I asked her reason.She said that she had a big fight for her parents ."What happened "I asked."I went to a concert the last night.They did't like it and scolded me when I came back,"She replied.My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.She buys all of his CDs and listens his music every day.She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.My uncle and aunt are worried about her.I guess that's show they scolded her.I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents.

【She seemed very sadly.】应该改为She seemed very sad.句意为她看起来十分伤心.seem为系动词,此句中为主系表结构,不需要用副词.
【She said that she had a big fight for her parents .】两个错误.应该改为She said that she had had a big fight with her parents.句意为她说她和她爸妈大吵一架.间接引语中主句中用的为过去时said,那么引语中表示过去发生的事情要用过去完成时.另外与...吵架是fight with,固定的.fight for是为...而战斗.
【I went to a concert the last night.】应该改为I went to a concert last night.我昨晚去看了场音乐会.昨晚就是last night ,不需要加冠词the
【My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.】改为My cousin is crazy about a pop singer句意为我堂妹对一个流行歌手十分着迷.这是说明一种事实,她现在仍然对歌手着迷,要用一般现在时.
【She buys all of his CDs and listens his music every day.】改为She has bought all of his CDs and listens his music every day.句意为她已经买了他是所有的CD,并且每天都听他的歌.买CD应该是过去已经完成的事并对现在有影响.应该也可以改成过去式.
【She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.】此句有两处错误,改为She has gone to all of his concert and cares about everything about her.句意为她去了他的每一场演唱会而且对关于他的一切都十分关心.我认为去演唱会要强调一个“已经”意思,嗯,应该也可以改成过去式吧.是关心他的每一件事,肯定句中用everything.
【I guess that's show they scolded her.】应该为I guess that's show why they scolded her.关于这个句子我一开始还没看懂..后来才想明白,句意为我猜想这就解释了为什么他们要责备她.句子中有三套主谓结构,因此关系词肯定有两个,前面的宾语从句的that是省略掉了,但是why不能省.
【I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents.】应该改为I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents'.注意是在最后的parents这个词后加一撇.句意为我希望堂妹会明白这是她的错而不是她父母的.是“不是父母的错误”,因此要用名词所有格形式.
呃,没找到别的了.大概就是这些了吧.其中有两个我不太确定,就是我改成现在完成时的那两个.晕了晕了..
还有啊,我找到了不止9个错.你自己根据自己最近学的取舍吧.
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