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As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, first more and more traffic accidents happened, it made a lot of person lost their life. Second, there is more pollution in many big cities because of the cars .We can’t move in the cars because of the heavy traffic. There are more and more people realized it and they want to change it .And the No Cars Day is born , On September 22nd every year, There are no car in many Europe country .I think it’s good for us and our country should learn from them . And we will have a better life with it! 高一新生所写，开头是题目已给出。请崔老师评改。在升华一下，在给高一新生总结下怎么写好作文 谢谢
解题思路： 高一的学生能写出这样的作文很让人兴奋，因为作文的布局谋篇非常好，语言也很精彩，很丰富；思路流畅，逻辑性强。
解题过程：
As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, first more and more traffic accidents happened, it made a lot of person lost their life. Second, there is more pollution in many big cities because of the cars .We can’t move in the cars because of the heavy traffic.
There are more and more people realized it and they want to change it .And the No Cars Day is born , On September 22nd every year, There are no car in many Europe country .I think it’s good for us and our country should learn from them . And we will have a better life with it!
1. first 在这里有点别扭 不要它了
2. happened ---happen 叙述的客观事实用一般现在时
3. , it made a lot of person lost their life.
---and it causes a lot of people lose their lives
1） 逗号表明是 两个分句，所以 it 前加上 and
2） made --causes客观事实用一般现在时;
cause ： sth / sb 致使某人做 （主语可为 人或事）；
make 主语通常为人
3）a lot of + 名词复数
4）lost—lose make / cause sb do
5) life—lives their + 复数名词
4. realized---realizing / who realize
前面There are中已经有了一个动词，所以后面要用 非谓语动词 （现在分词）或变为从句 作定语
5. is –was 出生是过去的事
6. every year,---句号
7. There are no car in many Europe country .
--There are no cars on that day in many Europe countries.
8. And we will have a better life with it!
--I’m sure that we will have a better life if all of us try to use fewer cars.
As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, more and more traffic accidents happen, and it causes a lot of people lose their lives. Besides, there is more pollution in many big cities because of the cars .We can’t move in the cars because of the heavy traffic.
There are more and more people realizing it and they want to change it .And the No Cars Day was born , On September 22nd every year. There are no cars on that day in many Europe country .I think it’s good for us and our country should learn from them . I’m sure that we will have a better life if all of us try to use fewer cars.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, first more and more traffic accidents happened, it made a lot of person lost their life. Second, there is more pollution in many big cities because of the cars .We can’t move in the cars because of the heavy traffic.
There are more and more people realized it and they want to change it .And the No Cars Day is born , On September 22nd every year, There are no car in many Europe country .I think it’s good for us and our country should learn from them . And we will have a better life with it!
1. first 在这里有点别扭 不要它了
2. happened ---happen 叙述的客观事实用一般现在时
3. , it made a lot of person lost their life.
---and it causes a lot of people lose their lives
1） 逗号表明是 两个分句，所以 it 前加上 and
2） made --causes客观事实用一般现在时;
cause ： sth / sb 致使某人做 （主语可为 人或事）；
make 主语通常为人
3）a lot of + 名词复数
4）lost—lose make / cause sb do
5) life—lives their + 复数名词
4. realized---realizing / who realize
前面There are中已经有了一个动词，所以后面要用 非谓语动词 （现在分词）或变为从句 作定语
5. is –was 出生是过去的事
6. every year,---句号
7. There are no car in many Europe country .
--There are no cars on that day in many Europe countries.
8. And we will have a better life with it!
--I’m sure that we will have a better life if all of us try to use fewer cars.
As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, more and more traffic accidents happen, and it causes a lot of people lose their lives. Besides, there is more pollution in many big cities because of the cars .We can’t move in the cars because of the heavy traffic.
There are more and more people realizing it and they want to change it .And the No Cars Day was born , On September 22nd every year. There are no cars on that day in many Europe country .I think it’s good for us and our country should learn from them . I’m sure that we will have a better life if all of us try to use fewer cars.
最终答案：略