请高手修改语法!可以对内容和文章结构也提出意见

请高手修改语法!可以对内容和文章结构也提出意见
Dear Child:
I know you can not understand why I am so strict with you,and list a lot of rules for you to obey.I never regret to do so because I love you.Have you heard of Amy Chua,or the “Tiger Mother”?Her stories of never accepting a grade lower than an A,of insisting on hours of math and spelling drills and piano and violin practice each day (weekends and vacations included),of not allowing play dates or sleepovers or television or computer games or even school plays.Yes,it is strict,even cruel.But honey,you are too young to control yourself,but as your parent,I know it clearly what is better to you.The first thing I want you to know is that I am not a monster.Everything I do as a mother builds on a foundation of love and compassion.
I know you hate me to forbid you to do a lot of things,especially the things you like.I never regret to do so because I love you.I forbid you to eat snakes,to hang out when your friends invite you to join them,or to turn off TV or computer when it is the time to sleep.I can realize your feelings,but I have to stop you even you are angry with me.If you do not follow my advice,as a result,you will get fatter and fatter after eating too much unhealthy food,you will forget to study when you play with your friends,and you will feel sleepy because you went to bed too late.By disciplining you,I can inculcate self-discipline.And by restricting your choices as a child,I can give you so many choices in your life as an adult.I hope what I am doing now can help you to get a bright future.
I know you always complain about my strict education,and you want to live your own life,to do anything you want.I never regret to do so because I love you.I do not care about what you think of me.As your parent,tiger parenting is necessary.To be your “tiger parent”,I can mention you what you should do,what you should not do.I can urge you when you want to give up,to encourage you when you feel tired,to help you when you in trouble.You can learn that you are capable of overcoming adversity and achieving goals in this way.I am sure you will meet lots of difficulties in the future,so I train you sternly,just want you to be successful,and you need to seek approval from your strict parent.As a proverb goes:“Practice makes perfect” So I believe you need to practice again and again.
I am so sorry that sometimes I got a bad temper or sometimes I yelled at you when I saw you did something wrong.I wish you are all perfect but in fact no one perfect because we are human being.You have argued with me because of my strict education,but I have no complaint because I am happy when I see your smiling face.My dear children,I hope you will understand me some day later.I believe you will pardon me for my bad temper and any unhappy thing.No matter what you think,there is nothing can change my love to my children.You are the whole shoot of my life.I love you.

I suppose you are the author of this writing.So I'm not going to bother with Chinese typing.Grammatically,the writing is excellent.I doubt if I can write so well.However,as a reader,I can easily see some grammar mistakes,which I'll correct for you and mark them with [ ] just to indicate where the changes are.My editing may not be thorough.
Please note that everything is just for your reference.
Dear Child:
I know you can not understand why I am so strict with you,and list a lot of rules for you to obey.I never regret to do so because I love you.Have you heard of Amy Chua,or the “Tiger Mother”?Her stories of never accepting a grade lower than an A,of insisting on hours of math and spelling drills and piano and violin practice each day (weekends and vacations included),of not allowing play dates or sleepovers or television or computer games or even school plays.Yes,it is strict,even cruel.But honey,you are too young to control yourself; [whereas] as your parent,I know it clearly what is better [for] you.The first thing I want you to know is that I am not a monster.Everything I do as a mother [is built] on a foundation of love and compassion.
I know you hate me [for forbidding] you to do a lot of things,especially the things you like.I never regret to do so because I love you.I forbid you to eat [snacks],to hang out when your friends invite you to join them,or to turn off TV or computer when it is the time to sleep.I [know] your feelings,but I have to stop you even [though] you are angry with me.If you do not follow my advice,as a result,you will get fatter and fatter after eating too much unhealthy food,you will forget to study when you play with your friends,and you will feel sleepy because you went to bed too late [the night before].By disciplining you,I can inculcate self-discipline.And by restricting your choices as a child,I can give you so many choices in your life as an adult.I hope what I am doing now can help you to get a bright future.
I know you always complain about my strict education,and you want to live your own life,to do anything you want.I never regret to do so because I love you.I do not care about what you think of me.As your parent,tiger parenting is necessary.To be your “tiger parent”,I can [instruct] you what you should do,what you should not do.I can urge you when you want to give up,to encourage you when you feel tired,to help you when you [are] in trouble.You can learn that you are capable of overcoming adversity and achieving goals in this way.I am sure you will meet lots of difficulties in the future,so I train you sternly,just [wanting] you to be successful; and you need to seek approval from your strict parent.(Not sure what this previous sentence means.) As a proverb goes:“Practice makes perfect” So I believe you need to practice again and again.
I am so sorry that sometimes I got a bad temper or sometimes I yelled at you when I saw you did something wrong.I wish you are all perfect but in fact no one [is] perfect because we are [all] human [beings].You have argued with me because of my strict education,but I have no complaint because I am happy when I see your smiling face.My dear children,(child or children?) I hope you will understand me some day later.I believe you will pardon me for my bad temper and [anything unhappy].No matter what you think,[ ] nothing can change my love [for] my children.You are the whole shoot of my life.I love you.
Some unsolicited comments:
I have to say that I am not a fan of "tiger parenting" and if I were the children whom this letter is addressed to,I could hardly be convinced by all the excuses made in the name of love.
Anyway,I respect people's different parenting styles and will not put forward any argument here.The only thing I want to mention is that excusing your own bad temper as the style of "tiger parenting" does not seem to be acceptable.Tiger parenting is characterized by its strictness,sterness,persistence,peseverance,etc,but definitely not bad temper.You can insist on your parenting strategies,but you have to do it calmly,with a stable state of mind.If the things you do cause you to lose temper easily,it usually means you are not doing it right,because constant anger is really not a healthy state of mind.
Well,maybe you have a rather good control of your temper and you just lose it very occasionally.Then apologies for being intrusive,and please believe that my intentions are good.After all,I am also a mother and we both want the best for our children.
Good luck.