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帮我加工英语演讲稿!(错误基本没有,现在希望把它改得更有文采)

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帮我加工英语演讲稿!(错误基本没有,现在希望把它改得更有文采)
现在要参加一个很重要的演讲比赛,
My Dreams
In this world,everybody has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of making a large number of money,and becoming millionaires overnight.Some people hope to be famous,dreaming of being well-known all over the world in a single night.Others dream of having beauty that nothing can be compared with.In the green years ,I always keep dreaming a lot of things,although some may sound crazy.
I dream to read up all the books that I like ,such as the literature of Shakespeare,the theories of Bacon and the composing of Steghen Hawking.I wanna indulge myself in the books ,and find a authentic self in the knowledge,a curious,studious girl.
I dream of getting the hangof some language such as English,Japanese,Russion,Spanish and so on.In this way,I can go to these countries to teach Chinese ,and become a world-wide-renown Chinese teather.
Now I'm learning painting,for I'm very interested in Digital Animation.I want to compose a lot of animation opus like Takewchi Naoko.
I want to set foot in different kinds of jobs,as someone once said,the person who experience the most lives the most wonderfully.I also wanna make a lot of money so that I can travel around the world.I dream of going to all the places I want to go,meeting all the persons I want to meet,tasting all the food I want to have a taste.I'm expecting to realize every little things I'm dreaming of.
I think the dream is a journey,not a destination,so my best dream is to always have a dream.And I believe as long as I'm dreaming,believing,and trying,I can go anywhere and achive anything!
你写的还是挺不错的,就是有些词汇有点重复,还有要学会用连接词这样读起来比较有逻辑感.我可是很认真帮你改罗,可惜能力有限.
My Dreams
In this world,everybody has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of making a large number of money,and becoming millionaires overnight,while some people hope to be famous,dreaming of being well-known all over the world in a single night.In addition,others dream of having beauty that nothing can be compared with.In the green years ,I always keep dreaming plenty of things,although some may sound crazy.
I dream to read up all the books that I like ,such as the literature of Shakespeare,the theories of Bacon and the composing of Steghen Hawking,because I wanna indulge myself in the books ,and find a authentic self in the knowledge,a curious,studious girl.
I dream of getting the hangof some language such as English,Japanese,Russion,Spanish and so on as well.In this way,I can go to these countries to teach Chinese ,and become a world-wide-renown Chinese teather.
Now I'm learning painting,for I'm very interested in Digital Animation.I hope to compose a lot of animation opus like Takewchi Naoko.
I would like to set foot in different kinds of jobs,as someone once said,the person who experience the most lives the most wonderfully.I also think of make a great deal of money so that I can travel around the world.I dream of going to all the places I want to go,meeting all the persons I want to meet,tasting all the food I am fond of.I'm expecting to realize every little things I'm dreaming of.
To sum up,I have a feeling that the dream is a journey,not a destination,so my best dream is to always have a dream.And I believe as long as I'm dreaming,believing,and trying,I can go anywhere and achive anything!