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短文改错 快Last week our class has organine an activity to thank

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Last week our class has organine an activity to thank our teachers befor graduation.In thursday we had a class meeting to discuss what to do.We came up many good ideas.Then we decided to send them gifts and did some good deeds.The next day we carried our plan.Some of us cleaned the teachrs'office and decorated it with pots of flowers,make it more comfortable for the teachers to work.Others helped wash the cars and bikes.And still others gave wellprepared gifts to the teachers,which were very pleasant and expressed their best wishes to us.
We all felt happy about how we had done for our teachers.
改正在括号处标出!共十处错误(并更正楼主一些输入错误)!
Last week our class (去掉has) organined an activity to thank our
1.last week做句子时间状语时,句子只能使用一般过去时.
teachers before graduation.(On) Thursday we had a class meeting to
2.“在星期几”,介词用on
discuss what to do.We came up (加入with) many good ideas.Then we
3.come up with...“想出/提出...”
decided to send them gifts and (do) some good deeds.The next day we
4.do和send并列,为decided to后面的动词原形
carried (加入out) our plan.Some of us cleaned the teachers' office
5.carry out 执行/进行/开展
and decorated it with lots of flowers,(making) it more comfortable
6.make前面无连词,所以用其现在分词形式做结果状语
for the teachers to work(加入in).Others helped wash the cars and
7.to work in it(即the teachers' office),所以in不能省略
the bikes.And still others gave well-prepared gifts to the teachers,(who) were very (pleased) and expressed their best wishes to us.
8.非限制性定语从句的关系词指代the teachers指人,所以用who
9.pleasant意思是“令人愉快的”,pleased意思才是“感到愉快的”
We all felt happy about (what) we had done for our teachers.
10.about后面的宾语从句中done后面缺少宾语,所以用what代替