作业帮一个英语句子语法问题!
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一个英语句子语法问题!
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that .,for the reason that it is universally acknowledged that taking care of our parents is a virtue,which should be accepted,respected,appreciated and advocated.请问这个句子有没有语法错误?如果有错在哪,在不改变句子的情况下该怎么修改?
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that .,for the reason that it is universally acknowledged that taking care of our parents is a virtue,which should be accepted,respected,appreciated and advocated.请问这个句子有没有语法错误?如果有错在哪,在不改变句子的情况下该怎么修改?
语法没有什么错误,就是个别字眼需要斟酌一下,用字不要显得太学究气,要平易近人为好.
universally 最好替换成 widely.另外在逻辑上有点不适当的地方,就是 for the reason 本身就是指代了前面省略号说的一大段的原因了,你这里还要引用一个that的同位语从句来继续讲这个原因做什么呢?这嘴碎的,太 wordy 啦!最后的 which 引导的非限定性定语从句还是可以接受的.
最后可以改为：
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that . ,for that reason, it is widely acknowledged that taking care of our parents is a virtue, which should be accepted, respected, appreciated and advocated.
universally 最好替换成 widely.另外在逻辑上有点不适当的地方,就是 for the reason 本身就是指代了前面省略号说的一大段的原因了,你这里还要引用一个that的同位语从句来继续讲这个原因做什么呢?这嘴碎的,太 wordy 啦!最后的 which 引导的非限定性定语从句还是可以接受的.
最后可以改为：
The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that . ,for that reason, it is widely acknowledged that taking care of our parents is a virtue, which should be accepted, respected, appreciated and advocated.