作业帮求高手检查英语作文有木有错,求指出
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求高手检查英语作文有木有错,求指出
The summer holidays are coming soon.I plan to go to France with my friends.Paris is the capital of France.I plan to go there by plane.It is a warm place,so we need to take some coats,a map of Paris and some money.We can visit Louvre,Eiffel Tower and so an.I like photography and listen to music,so I need to take a camera and a MP4.I can take 7000yuan go there.I think it is very nice.Do you like go there with me.I like my summer holidays
The summer holidays are coming soon.I plan to go to France with my friends.Paris is the capital of France.I plan to go there by plane.It is a warm place,so we need to take some coats,a map of Paris and some money.We can visit Louvre,Eiffel Tower and so an.I like photography and listen to music,so I need to take a camera and a MP4.I can take 7000yuan go there.I think it is very nice.Do you like go there with me.I like my summer holidays
暑假只有一个,所以第一句应该是holiday is coming soon.等等是and so on.可能第三行打错了吧.like后面动词要用ing或者不定式形式,所以第三行应该是listening to,mp4前面冠词应该用an,因为是元音因素开头的单词.第四行应该是7000 yuan to go there,少了个介词,最后两句：Would you like to go there with me?I like my summer holiday.
再问： 英语书上已给开头是复数，后面的错误谢谢指出
再答： 好哒。那你只需要保持前后一致就好了。全篇就都holidays。
不用谢哦亲~
再问： 英语书上已给开头是复数，后面的错误谢谢指出
再答： 好哒。那你只需要保持前后一致就好了。全篇就都holidays。
不用谢哦亲~