作业帮英语检查,改正下错误就行!
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英语检查,改正下错误就行!
hello everyone
today I will give a presentation about men's makeup.
I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'
1.have you ever worn makeup?
2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear makeup?
3.Generally how many kinds of basic tolitery kit for women's makeup are there .i 'm very glad to look forward the man's answer.who can tell me?
有男的知道一般对于女人来说最基本的化妆KIT有哪些
if you can tell me just 4kinds ,i will give u a giorgio armani's new perfume.
in nowadays.more and more men's skin care and makeup products come out and sell well in the market
现在出来了越来越多的专门为男士的护肤品和化妆品）
you just do as me like this~i think its so easy to u
有错误或者写的很别扭的地方都帮我改下,
hello everyone
today I will give a presentation about men's makeup.
I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'
1.have you ever worn makeup?
2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear makeup?
3.Generally how many kinds of basic tolitery kit for women's makeup are there .i 'm very glad to look forward the man's answer.who can tell me?
有男的知道一般对于女人来说最基本的化妆KIT有哪些
if you can tell me just 4kinds ,i will give u a giorgio armani's new perfume.
in nowadays.more and more men's skin care and makeup products come out and sell well in the market
现在出来了越来越多的专门为男士的护肤品和化妆品）
you just do as me like this~i think its so easy to u
有错误或者写的很别扭的地方都帮我改下,
有些中国式英文的痕迹,我来改写一下,供参考(考虑到你要自己说出来,应该口语化强一些）:
Hello everyone,
Today I'm gonna present you with something on men's makeup and demonstrate how to use them.
I would like to ask you,all the gentlemen here:(pause,then say)
1.have you ever put up any makeup?
2.if you haven't,do you think you will accept the idea of wearing makeup?and do you think you will put up something in the future?
3.Any idea on how many kinds of basic cosmetic kits for ladies there are?I will be very happy if a man answers these questons.Any one please?
If you can tell me 4 kinds,i will give u a gift -- giorgio armani's new perfume.
Nowadays,more and more skin care and makeup products come into the market for men and they sell really well.
Makeup for men is not hard at all.I will show you how easy it is if you just follow me on what I will be doing here.
Hello everyone,
Today I'm gonna present you with something on men's makeup and demonstrate how to use them.
I would like to ask you,all the gentlemen here:(pause,then say)
1.have you ever put up any makeup?
2.if you haven't,do you think you will accept the idea of wearing makeup?and do you think you will put up something in the future?
3.Any idea on how many kinds of basic cosmetic kits for ladies there are?I will be very happy if a man answers these questons.Any one please?
If you can tell me 4 kinds,i will give u a gift -- giorgio armani's new perfume.
Nowadays,more and more skin care and makeup products come into the market for men and they sell really well.
Makeup for men is not hard at all.I will show you how easy it is if you just follow me on what I will be doing here.