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Computers Nowadays Computers are become more and more popula

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Computers
Nowadays Computers are become more and more popular around the world.We can use computers to do a lot of things.For example,some use them to work,others use them to relax.Computers also can help us to send e-mail to our friends,do some online shopping and play games.However,there are something terrible.In the Internet,someone may trick you,or some children may be keen on playing games instead of study.If We should use computer correctly,they will be helpful and important.
只用帮忙改下病句和语法错误就行了,希望今晚上10点前能好,明天考试用!
Computers are become 改为are becaming .help us to send e-mail 改为help us send 第三点If We should use computer correctly,they will be helpful and important.they与computer不符,改其中一个,建议改为computers
还有some该觉用得太多,不是错误,但不舒服最后的should建议改为could