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英语短文改错,求救,考试中…
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one rain day while i was walking home from school with one of my friend,a car came to stop beside us.The driver which happened to be our teacher rolled the window down and offered us an umbrella because he found we wet.I stood there speechless as i was so moving by the teacher insisted,so we grateful accepted the offer.we thanked him and watched the car to disappear down the road.The teacher might need the umbrella himself
,but he preferred to give to us.what a noble deed!i am determined to pass on this good deed to others if it is possibly in the future.
1.one rainy day
2.one of my friends
3.the driver who happened to be
4.he found we were wet
5.i was moved
6.so we are grateful 7.to accept the offer
8.watched the car disappear
9.give it to us
10.it is possible
再问: 虽然已经没用了,但还是很谢谢你