作业帮帮忙看一下这段文字有什么语法错误吗?初学英语,多多指教
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帮忙看一下这段文字有什么语法错误吗?初学英语,多多指教
Already ten years.Ten years ago,when we was young,we don't have the courage.Sorry,I didn't went to high school together with you; I'm so sorry,I'm married; and thank you,that night you did't let me make special things.Maybe missed something,it means miss one lifetime,but I still want to,always ......Maybe I will abandon my family,to be deserted by one's followers,Even though we have no results,even you never give me hope.But now,I will try my best for my family is responsible,and must do,because I'm a man.Thank you gave the memories for me,I will treasure the life,you have been my heart very important person.
Already ten years.Ten years ago,when we was young,we don't have the courage.Sorry,I didn't went to high school together with you; I'm so sorry,I'm married; and thank you,that night you did't let me make special things.Maybe missed something,it means miss one lifetime,but I still want to,always ......Maybe I will abandon my family,to be deserted by one's followers,Even though we have no results,even you never give me hope.But now,I will try my best for my family is responsible,and must do,because I'm a man.Thank you gave the memories for me,I will treasure the life,you have been my heart very important person.
Already ten years.Ten years ago,when we [were] young,we [ didn't] have the courage.Sorry,I didn't [ go ] to high school together with you; I'm so sorry,I'm married; and thank you,that night you did't let me make special things.Maybe missed something,it means [ missing] one lifetime,but I still want to,always ......Maybe I will abandon my family,to be deserted by one's followers,Even though we have no results,even you never give me hope.But now,I will try my best [ to be responsible for my family ] ,and must do,because I'm a man.Thank you [for giving] the memories for me,I will treasure the life,you have been [a very important person in my heart ]
这表达方式好特别 改了几处常规的表达
这表达方式好特别 改了几处常规的表达