作业帮交通事故 （菁菁草老师评改）
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Dear Wang Ming
I’m sorry to hear that you got hurt in the accident and met lots of problems in your life.
Your friend as I am, I want to tell that you should not hold a negative attitude towards life, and that there are also many jobs for the disabled, so you never lose chance to lead a good life. Do you remember Zhang Haidi who can let the happiness make from pain. If she can do that , why you can’t ? As we can see, whether a person gets a good job depends on whether he or she has a skill in hand. If you learn some skills, not only can you earn your living but you can help others feeling successful.
Let’s try to forget the unhappiness and become a member of our society like everyone. 老师给出分数，和您表达的句子，我是张悦，给出分数
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解题过程：
Dear Wang Ming I’m sorry to hear that you got hurt in the accident and met lots of problems in your life. Your friend as I am, I want to tell that you should not hold a negative attitude towards life, and that there are also many jobs for the disabled, so you never lose chance to lead a good life. Do you remember Zhang Haidi who can let the happiness make from pain. If she can do that , why you can’t ? As we can see, whether a person gets a good job depends on whether he or she has a skill in hand. If you learn some skills, not only can you earn your living but you can help others feeling successful. Let’s try to forget the unhappiness and become a member of our society like everyone. 老师给出分数，和您表达的句子，我是张悦，给出分数 1、表达不通顺，改为as a friend of yours， 2、改为tell you或者say，因为tell一般是双宾语 3、句意不通。建议改为who has gained happiness and success despite so much pain of illness。 4、用疑问句，why can’t you？ 5、Help sb do是结构，所以把feeling改为feel 6、下划线是精华句子。张悦同学的作文比较通顺，语言简炼。个别的错误而已。给分18分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear Wang Ming I’m sorry to hear that you got hurt in the accident and met lots of problems in your life. Your friend as I am, I want to tell that you should not hold a negative attitude towards life, and that there are also many jobs for the disabled, so you never lose chance to lead a good life. Do you remember Zhang Haidi who can let the happiness make from pain. If she can do that , why you can’t ? As we can see, whether a person gets a good job depends on whether he or she has a skill in hand. If you learn some skills, not only can you earn your living but you can help others feeling successful. Let’s try to forget the unhappiness and become a member of our society like everyone. 老师给出分数，和您表达的句子，我是张悦，给出分数 1、表达不通顺，改为as a friend of yours， 2、改为tell you或者say，因为tell一般是双宾语 3、句意不通。建议改为who has gained happiness and success despite so much pain of illness。 4、用疑问句，why can’t you？ 5、Help sb do是结构，所以把feeling改为feel 6、下划线是精华句子。张悦同学的作文比较通顺，语言简炼。个别的错误而已。给分18分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略